That is A LOT of PLS spam o.o

1 vote for Akuroku3

great job!

great so far :D

OH MY GAWD JULY 29 IS MY BDAY AND AXEL DAY? WOW IM A LUCKY FANGIRL DAWWWWWWWWWWW LAWLZ THATS EPICNESS RIGHT THERE

I liked the story, it was cute. There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors, especially in the first few chapters. It was also very spaced out and kinda seemed to jump a bit. (for instance, the fact that Sora left early on exploring the town, and spied on Axel and Roxas, plus you never revealed the person in the cloak with him, or why they even bothered or cared.) My suggestion is to get a beta, who can give you advice on what to add to your story and make suggestions, and check for errors and such. -not a flame, I just thought I'd let you know.- well thanks for the story and hope to read more of your writings.

I loved the ending!

Roxas/Namine is a little too much like incest x.x AkuRoku is just goddamned hot, too, so AkuRoku all the way!

How could this match made in heaven possibly be losing? Please put a vote down for me!

I would like to add a vote for AkuRoku, please? Thank you, and your story is wonderful.

YES.

A vote for akuroku! cause thats one of the best pairings ever and does Roxas really lose the match? nooooo that can't be

OMG I BET AXEL AND ROXAS HOOK UP

Fine I reviewed this story is awesome and we approve of this message akuroku foreva

1 vote for akuroku :)

and sorry for not reviewing in the last charpter, its just that im really lazy and what it make it worse is that im not really good writing in english (yaay im mexican :)

ps:yaaaay for Axels insanity head xD ok i get it... im bad at giving adice.. thats why i dont write fanfics u.u

:)

Ok yeah you know me, I've reviewed before and I shall again.

First off, one vote for akuroku! :3

next, I really enjoy your story and was hoping for a new chapter. All well, I'm happy to help