| Reviews for In the Shadows |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 5/17/2014 No- of course Bella is not going to change, she will (at all of 18 years old) pine away until she dies over a reanimate corpse- who happens to be pretty. Never moving on. Thats not romantic, its not even sad. So basically this is the books with a VERY slightly changed POV. Well written but- The problem is the story really says nothing new and Bella is so selfish, so pathic, so unremitingly silly & stupud accompanied by a kind sick cruelty & sense of self-importance as to be totally unsympathetic |
 PastOneonta chapter 12 . 7/19/2013 Excellent story from Jacob's point of view. We're happy for him as he begins to spend time with Bella and help her to feel better. We feel badly for him missing Embry and fighting with Billy. But he's hopeful that Bella will feel something for him and his positive spirit keeps him going. The upcoming transformation is going to be tough. Even though Embry hinted at some thing Jake never believed the legends might be true. Quil continues to be a good friend, very well written. Bella is well written also but because this is Jacob's POV we primarily see his love and devotion to her while she gets better. If only she returned his love. |
| HeartoftheWind chapter 1 . 12/1/2012 Sorry I'm too lazy to log in but this is really great. Wonderful job! |
| mellymel124 chapter 12 . 10/28/2012 Awesome. Love this! |
| j.d.y chapter 12 . 10/24/2012 I really enjoyed thos one. Jake is so sweet and i adore quil. |
| LadyofSpain chapter 12 . 10/13/2012 Reading this I realized that maybe it was his strong emotions that prompted his change. Love is just as powerful as anger, probably more so. |
| LadyofSpain chapter 11 . 10/13/2012 Poor Jake, always testing the waters and gettin' the cold shoulder instead. |
| LadyofSpain chapter 10 . 10/13/2012 Boys! Why can they never back down? |
| LadyofSpain chapter 9 . 10/13/2012 The scene with Quil was typical and hilarious. That quiz nailed it. |
| LadyofSpain chapter 8 . 10/13/2012 It was nice to see that he actually knew the expressions on her face were because of thoughts of HIM. |
| LadyofSpain chapter 7 . 10/13/2012 I loved his inner monologue when she hugged him, and when he dreaded breaking down in front of her. |
| LadyofSpain chapter 6 . 10/13/2012 Jake is so far from the truth, he just wants Embry back. |
| LadyofSpain chapter 5 . 10/12/2012 It's funny how Quil thinks the total opposite of Jake on almost every issue. I noticed you use Asterisks in place of letters in some of your less than nice language. I do too, how funny! |
| LadyofSpain chapter 4 . 10/12/2012 Yes it was a perfect day. Junkin' and Bella. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/12/2012 As usual, the banter between Q&E was priceless. |
