Beautiful!

In these present trying times I found your fascinating tale to entertain me. I loved the way you twirled the connections in the original P&P into an interesting mix; tying it up delightfully at the end. I was especially pleased with your portrayal of Bingley as a man with a bit more gumption. Well done!

Complicated story with a lot of secretive plans in order to get to D&E HEA (J&B as well).
Well done on writing and sharing your stories despite all the challenges you had to face.

Lovely story. Would you be tempted to write an epilogue?

It's a tad confusing in several sections especially the Bingley -Georgiana betrothal. It's not making sense. Otherwise great story!

Such an exasperating man. I almost wish she turned him down. Congratulations on your marriage. Thanks for writing it.

First time I read your story and I love it! Darcy the hero.

Thanks for sharing your writing. ~,~

So that was a scheme! I couldn't understand the reason for the overheard conversation and the ridicule to have Geogiana and Bingley engaged. I knew something was amiss here. Well done!

The overheard conversation can't be realistic

Isn't Elizabeth supposed to be mourning longer than 2 months? That might influence the rest of the story.

OH MY GOSH THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD. I LOVE IT SO MUCH WOW IT WAS WONDERFUL

Very sweet conclusion! Glad to hear your mother recovered and congrats on finding your own Mr. Darcy!

Very nice twist on a classic.

Fun story! Thank you so much for sharing!