Reviews for Smoke Gets In Your Eyes
dragonBug27 chapter 1 . 9/28/2019
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eitann chapter 1 . 1/6/2019
Just found your stories. This one is cute. Very well written and in character. I can completly picture the scene. Thank you !
Hells Bells chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
Perfect ,loved this .
Hells Bells chapter 2 . 3/1/2018
Loved .
sleepycame chapter 1 . 10/3/2017
very cute and in character ! loved it
ncisduckie chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
This is really cute and great (I typed gray tho and Idk what that even means?! Freudian slip about the smoke?!) and I really dig it. Nicely done!
conservativegirl chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
Awww cute! I was looking for Tiva stories and found this, very sweet :) I'll go read Motek now
quokka chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
Loved it. 'Very attractive brunette', and Ziva standing up to Gibbs. And Gibbs' thoughts, loking at them in the backseat of the car. It all feels so real.
pokemon fan 98 chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
I loved this! Great!
zevaah chapter 2 . 8/8/2014
Ohh I am so in love with this story! I would really really love if you would write another tiva fanfiction, maybe one about her homecoming? It's been a while since you wrote the last ncis fanfic, but if you saw season 11 you could write a new one?
Sorry for mistakes, english isn't my first language:)
hellishrose chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Very different premise- I loved it. Your writing is very good and your dialogue between characters feels so natural!
madcloisfan chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
Loved it
starryjules chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
"So are you telling me I should excuse this as you bringing back-up home with you, DiNozzo?"

HA! Such a great mix of humor and bittersweetness (that Shannon/Jenny line was painfully good!) Glad I randomly found this, a very enjoyable read!
Ashi-Grey chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
brilliant fic, loved it :)
Lilliana-Lissa HathawayDavid97 chapter 2 . 11/7/2012
Loved the first chapter! Can't wait for the next!

Keep Writing!

xx Lilliana-Lissa Hathaway97 xx
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