Wow... I can quite honestly say I have never read a story like this before, even if it is only a one-shot :) This is a brilliant little story, and very well written :)

that was amazing! i really liked how you described Draco's point of view and the ending was awesome but sad although not in a bad way :)

I have to say one thing first. While I love many fanfictions, I cannot, in all truthfulness, say that most of them are very well written. This is not like that at all. Everything is described perfectly, with no weird words or awkward phrases that are far too common in fanfictions. You've written a wonderful story that is also quite believable. Fantastic job! Plus, I'm in love with the ending. :)