As much as I like to think Zabini is better than this, I love how you made Pavarti & Lavender's friendship more important than all else- beautiful story :)

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Even five minutes after I read this, I am still speechless.

I love this! :D It was so heartfelt and just... brilliant.

I don't meant to be overly excited, especially when this is kind of... angsty, for lack of a better word, I suppose, but it was good.

Awesome job. :)

Shit. This was written so perfectly, I hate your Blaise. You wrote him so so well, I hate him now. I admire the details you put into your stories, e.g. "Chairs being knocked over, desks being cleared with one swipe, papers fluttering to the floor."

Really lovely.

Pinky x 3

Sorry, don't feel much like logging in.

Anyway, I loved it!

Does that mean that Blaise really did like Parvati, if he missed her and all? And really, the one I feel most sorry for? Probably Parvati.

Much love!

And keep up the great story writing, you almost have as many stories as me now that I think of it... (38)

-Amy

I love the strength of the friendship shown between Lavender and Parvati, especially how Blaise is so utterly convinced Parvati won't forgive Lavender and she does (in fact, by the end it almost sounds like Parvati's more offended that Blaise doesn't think of highly of Lavender than she is by the fact that they were cheating on her). I also like how you worked the prompt in.

Great job!

I loved it! I kind of wanted to kick Z. ... cold hands, cold feet was my favotite. Great freaking fantastic job, Bree, as always!

Aww, poor Parvati and Lavender too I guess. My favourites were the draw the line in the sane and the honesty prompts.

More fool him. Keep writing

I like it!

I really liked this. My favorite prompts you used were ribbon, and cold hands, cold feet. I'm slowly getting into Parvati/Blaise, and just Blaise stories in general, and this one convinced me even more that I should keep reading others. It was quite intense, and the title is amazing. Thanks for participating in the challenge.

-Iz :D

that was beautiful..

and tragic.

wow, that was intense. I really liked it, and the end was perfect for your story. And Blaise is a git, Parvati should have slapped him.

Really good. One of my favorites of your stories.