It was a great story and I loved reading it. Very different from others that I have read. The plot was great. I would have loved at the end if there was a part where Leah would kick Sue out when she was having the babies.

They all got what was coming to them though.

So, what really was Jacobs imprint name? Naila, Nina & Nora are those that I remember

can not wait for the sequel to be out if it will..hehehe..love the story..

This story needs some work, especially with regards to the writing. The plot idea is not half-bad but there are numerous grammar mistakes.

so her baby isnt a hybrid it shouldn't be so intelligent.

It seems you have a particular problem with ie and ei. They can definitely be confusing, but using a spell-checker will solve most of your problems. :)

Leah seems to be a bit out of character in this chapter, maybe the super smart and somewhat clairvoyant 4 month old foetus has taken her over? I got to the end of the chapter and still couldn't work out why she was licking Emmett. I'm just grateful that no had spilled some sugar grains on the floor while making a cup of coffee...

I really enjoyed this story.

loved the story and looking forward to reading the sequel!

i love this story (i think i may have already said that... but its true), and i really love Leah and Edward together

i am soooo loving this story!

I know you already decided, but I wanted to express my opinion on the already closed poll. You see I want 2. Not because I hate Leah, just because I want Leah to rise up and show them who is, and forever will be a boss ass bitch.

This is amazing. .I mean wow

Such a great story I loved reading it. You are a great writer I plan to read more of your work.

Whoop, there it is.

Good story line but I sincerely wish you had a beta to look over your grammar and spellings. Please look into that.