Ok... This was very different, still American in many instances, but with a strong MGLN to it, congrats on that. The story was well made, I love it how you kept Fate's name as T. Harllown to latter reveal what the T standed for, quite genius.

And though I didn't saw the sad end coming, I must admit it was a nice way to end. If anything, I think the end was a bit to abrupt, I would have liked a longer epilogue I guess, not for Fate but for those on the other timeline, as we didn't get to know how they moved on with their lives.

Finally, the mecha Nanoha, such a good add.
(I know it was just a glorified wheelchair but still counts!)

I wonder if they'd be able to travel between the different timelines with the thing that Yuuno made. That could've caused some cool shenans.

And I honestly expected that Alicia and Nanaho would hook up in the alternate timeline. Ah well. Rip in pieces.

Indeed, it is called wincest for a reason ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

This was amazing. Like wow. Poor Alicia though

I really liked this story. However, it would have been better if you showed nanoha's pov (the wife) while fate was missing.

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I did not expect nanoha to die, it really shocked me. I was hoping for a nanohaXalicia ending, it would have been very sweet.

Nevertheless i am satisfied with the way it ended. It goes to show how amazing of a writer you are.

That was... I don't even have the words. Is there a superlative to sublime ? Because it certainly applies here. I was moved to tears, something that very few literary works have been able to achieve... Sublime.

I cried so much! So beautiful!
Keep going with these amazing stories! :)

I was so sad when the alternate Nanoha died!
All in all, I liked this fic very much. Thank you for writing and sharing!

You're SUCH a brilliant writer.

Oh geez. This story destroys my heart.

Ahhhhhh! So sweet!

This is a beautiful, heart-wrenching, compelling start to a story. Very excited.

Shame that can't happen for Alt!Nano and Alicia...