This is an amazing story! you are very creative, and did a fantastic job on this!

This was awesome! I liked how you used her mother and Setsu's attitude! I was laughing all through chapter four, better than a soap opera indeed!

Super super job,they really put those two in their place. Love it. Acting as Setsu gave her the ability to be strong against her mother and Sho. Maybe now things will start going better for her. What surprise was how excited her mom was when she the Prisoner video. I really hope you can carry this story would be great to see how Sho responds and if her mom starts to see Kyoko for who she really is. Great job Ren. Thank you for a wonderful story.

Why were her eyes gold instead if silver?

Hehe love this and i have one thing to say her mother with who cares about her now everywhere is her playing field they can do anything to her mother they wanted with moko and what the other girls name who also in love me who writes in a book those two together alone will ruin her mother with ren its 100% worse and at least the president her mother is lucky she didnt die from this fanfic

I love this story. I read it awhile back and came back to reread it again. Not only is it entertainingly with scenes that made me laugh out loud, There's also good portrayal of the hurt caused by a toxic parent. Topped off with the heartwarming support Kyoko got to not only survive, but coming out triumphantly, the ordeal of 2 worst bullies in her life,. I think mistreated children suffer from PTSD and often doubt their self worth, yet Ren seems to know exacttly what to say and do for her to give her validation and understanding, like a healing balm. I wish all abused children can have this kind of support and get away from narcissists for good (and access to a dojo *wink). This is a story with humor, honesty and depth, so I thank you.

OMD.

This paragraph.. It's so good :D congratulations for making this great fanfic! :D

Ren frowned, "The way you said that implies that you don't think that your daughter is good enough to date someone like me? On the contrary, Ms Mogami, I am not good enough for her. But I plan on working the rest of my life just make myself worthy. I should make this clear in case you are tempted to try anything like this again: I will wait for as long as it takes, but I intend to be the one to marry Kyoko."

Excellent.

There is no way in hell Sho would reckon Kyoko in Setsu.

nice story ! thanks !

Great!i was laughing so a long time since i enjoyed a fanfiction dis good language!

Nice.

So cool !
Finally can see them like that even it's just fanfic *giggles*

Yessssssssssssssss. Today was a bad day for me and reading this cheered me up a lot. Thank you so much for writing. :)

it's beautiful i hope you'll continue it. i'm really interested of what happened after sho excuse himself.