I say are-oh

those kids didn't deserve to be killed. they were created by a monster and they didn't have a choice.
they seemed like good kids who loved each other...it was all James fault. for Bella to say they had to be punished is bull. they had no choice in the matter.
im not sure how to feel about this fic. too many things that just did not agree with me.
not about the conflicts since that's what makes the story but the subject matter and the characters of the players were just not likable...
the heroine (supposedly Bella) was very unlikable...I didn't even want to root for her, she was just a pathetic weakling... it was just a bad break up for heavens sake.
move the hell on..she got a gorgeous vamp now...a king!
I wanted caius freed to find a mate worthy of him and his fierceness.
when you change into a vampire, yes, everything stopped for them in that instance...
at the same time, they were supposed to have been perfected...but then again, there were a lot of vampire psychopaths so I guess mental diseases may remain.

Bella wants them back? after being rejected, she's so depressed, she can't even be good with her mate.
how pathetic is that? to want them back after what they did?
come on...i'd be spitting on them to never show their faces...
they left her, no matter what Edward told them to do, they could have stood up to him but they didn't...
why the hell does she want people/vampire like that back? ones that didn't stand up for her...

if she's so damn upset that she spiraled into this mentally depressed vampire, she should just telll them to leave her be...have her say and be a vampire, instead of the timid mouse that she was...
geese.

I would think she would want vampires that are supportive and who never betrayed her in her life...be family with the vultures...what does she need with the cullers for? it's not as if she's known them for that long either.

jeesh, bella is so damn pathetic...what a vampire, haha.
gotta give credit to caius...he's thousand times better than that coward Edward.

Ugh. You should’ve added a warning that your Bella would be weak, simpering, and useless all throughout your story. What a waste of time.

I’m really I’m trying with this story, fact that I’ve made this far says it. I hate hate hate hate hate hate loathe the characterisation of Bella. This is by far the most pathetic and insufferable Bella I have ever had the displeasure of reading. So big whoop your heart got broken by someone who wasn’t even for you. She has found her mate move the fuck in and be happy. This pathetic moping around trying to cling on to a humanity she will never get back. This is just downright infuriating and angers me in ways I can’t truly express. It was so fucking depressing it just angered me.

I love this fanfic, it was dark, angsty and realistic and I love Bella and any of the Volturi kings together

What a wonderful piece of brilliance! Truly enjoyed your work! Thank you and please continue spreading your genius around.

Loved your story keep writing them

Awe that was really sweet! Please write another! A Marcus and Bella would be great!

I pronounce it as 'Are-Oh'

wait. wait. james is freaking ded! wat is dis? wat is going on?!

This story was soooooo good.

I checked your profile and found no Aro story.. did you abandon the idea? I hope not

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