exxxxxxxtremely twisted in a good way though.

wow, sick, twisted, just wow.

Bad bad Alice and Jasper.

I loved this which makes me feel very wrong!

Totally amazing, so twisted, would really love to read more, is that wrong ? i think it is lol

horror. pure erotic horror. loved the writing.

WOW! That was seriously dark and utterly sick. Freakin' awesome job.

This was extremely dark and scary but strangely erotic.

that sure was twisted!

I really liked the story!

it is written in a way that makes you think "woha that is sick" and "it isn't so sick" at the same time!

good job!

Loved it! You should do a follow up chapter where Bella and her vamp mindreading husband deliver some long tortuous justice to her father's assaliants. With his ability and her control it would be be a great oportunity to exact a little justice for all of their victims by making them relive the kills. It would be the perfect excuse to fall off of the vegetarian bandwagon and explore a little Darkward and Dark Bella in the process. kae9403

Holy hell that was twisted, I love it

Aside from some spelling mishaps, this fic is pretty much in line with my dark and twisty alley. Bravo!

Would it be wrong to say that I love the darkness and bloodiness of it all?