This was sweet! I feel so bad for Mattie, poor baby is so confused, but I'm glad everything worked out fine in the end

I loved the interaction between Francis and Arthur too :) really, a great work, glad you wrote it and posted.

Thank you!

Omideath, that was adorable. I don't always like UsCa bug your story is awesome dude! \(/w/)/

Okay, the asking in superhero reference is definitely the way I would want to be asked honestly. I think you did an amazing job on this chapter.

This is exactly what I was looking for.

Your writing is amazing. And I think I actually prefer the nation AU in this. It isn't plain out smut, but goes into each character's feelings. And the sexuality of it is so subtle, but still sent shivers through me.

I think you could have made your chapters longer (mostly because I'm not a fan of short chapters), but that's nothing you need to change. Just a personal comment :p

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this.

okay that makes sense now. i have never
heard of australia being called stephen
so i had no idea who it was u were talking
about in the other chapter. lol knew
straight away however, at the mention
of koalas

Aw, that was pretty cutr. There wasn't anything glaringly wrong with the actual fabric of the story. The rating is too high though. There's literally no reason this isn't T. Also, the ANs are pretty awful (useless info, reiterating what we just read, spoiling future chapters) but I'm sure they've gotten better with time.

I enjoyed this quite a bit, thanks for the good read.

This is good so far but why would you add the sneeze part? That's an eastern thing, it isn't prevalent in northern America at all so why would they react to things in the way of a foreign culture? It makes no sense.

:,) AmeCan

This makes me laugh so much. It's cute and sweet and... Utterly, totally endearing. As well as historical. I still love "Debt bla bla aru... Pay me back bla bla aru." Best part yet.

All my love,
Illead

THIS. I CAN'T. MY EMOTIONS. NGHHHAAVGFDGLYUIOBNLJH. *keysmash* Gahhhhhhh! I adored this story so much! I give you so much love for this!

Toni

I'm rooting for Alfred :D Also, FrUK is giving me feels.

Toni

"Back to thinking about Matthew in a leather catsuit." Yes. Yes yes yes.

Toni

SUCH CUTENESS CAN NOT EVEN BE POSSIBLE.

Toni

Laughed so hard. France and Alfred in the same place always kill me. Characterization is perfect.

Toni

Omg Mattie I love you just let me love you *_* Gosh I'm so hooked on this. I really love it so far, can't wait to read on!

Toni