why would ron say that? i mean, he's friends with dean and he's a muggle born? makes no sense

Hey, um, author? Can you put up a trigger warning for rape for chapter 22? I felt really uncomfortable and now I don’t feel okay to even sit in my families living room.

Please keep this in mind for future reference as well. This topic should not be taken lightly and you should always be on the look out for any possible triggers to warn your readers of.

This story is really good but did they forget that Harry, as a Riddle, is from the line of Slytherin?

Awesome as always!

A shame that you never finished.

you copy the books almost word for word, only changing who is saying what, then decide to change the monster in the chamber & the best you can do is call it a dracolisk. my my your imagination knows no bounds.

poor binns 'snickers'

this is the worst place for ginny a schemer in a place full of schemers that already doont like her

so dumbledore is Lord Bedume?

Love it, keep up the good work x

will there be another story? this is truly amazing

very very good story, please update asap...

If Harry new who Lupin was he may have not cut him off. The Dursley never deserved that money seeing that never used it for Harry anyway. If another confrontation between them happens which it wont have after what ever Tom did them happened by whipping there memory of Harry. As for Mr. Weasley how is that the family has earned 5500 gallons by the time Harry cut them off that this family cant afford to buy there kids descent clothing.

Great chapter. I new a confrontation with those nasty muggles would happen. Going to see Batman Returns directed by Tim Burton (real life husband to the actress who plays Bella) was a great choice of movie. From just the start this will be a very different second year.

Honestly, yea no. This is where I stop. Your story is like an exact copy of the books with a few names switched around. While you can switch around names, you can't switch around personalities and opinions. Slytherins are a certain way and so are Gryfindors, you can't just switch what characters say and expect people to go along with it. We already know how Slytherins and Gryfindors behave, you should try your hand at actually building characters and having an original plot, not just using the book to copy. Because your trying your hand at a totally different story from the book, you should build on the characters. Or it won't fit. I was super excited to read this but was pretty disappointed, there were times though that your originality shined through. But this second story used too much from the book.