Bullshit fanfic.

The idea/concept behind the story was great! The start was also good,
But You are a useless piece of tras*h. Thousands of shinobi couldn't defeat konoha but only about 250 mages is invading them? Yea, right you truly are fukin* insane.
You forget that not only shinobi have chakra, but they are also highly trained In Marshall arts, war, tactics, and professional assassin's. They were Born for war. They trained from age 5 to be a killer. Even without any special abilities a team of ANBU can wipe out the entire guild except for characters like Erza,Laxus,Mirajane,Guildarts.
Ninjas fought true Wars not your petty squabbling between two guilds they call war. The manga is very much high quality, you choose to ignore certain parts of manga cause its your worthless life that is low quality. You couldn't handle the fact that manga Naruto can wipe out all the guilds singel handedly.
I reaffirm! You are a worthless piece of dog poop.

Fuck you and fuck nardo that shitty excuse of a series.

The idea was good and the early chapters too, but you went too far to prevent Characters death. I mean, with the exception of Gildarts they didn't even lost a limb.
The end was rushed, and there ninjas talked too much.
Still in the end, there were several plotholes; With Kamui Kakashi would have killed Makarov together with Fairy Law; G-Sensei would have attacked immediately, ninjas would have attacked with the intention to kill, fusing their attacks in one like vs True Madara.
Considering the situation I doubt that Naruto would have used the reverse summon if he wasn't certain that there was someone to summon them to Konoha.
Akatsuki members would have not revealed the truth, and probably the Council would have fired Ēterion

Absolutely shit for the most part, fights made absolutely no sense. It's like you didn't want anyone to die, Konoha is literally being invaded and no ninjas are trying to kill mages.

Its a uninteresting story and a stupid one too

Don't write shit that's bad like this

We all know Konoha would win in a battle against Mages of Fiore.
And Akatsuki will join in to capture Naruto. Most Character death will be from Earthland

I despise fanfic where Naruto is a fucking moron. Knowing the area in which you operate is common fucking sense! That isn't rocket science! A shinobi is supposed to be secretive and paranoid! So why the fuck would go blab to a potential hostile. Waste of fucking time.

continues the story

So damn didn't naruto return?i was hoping for a great cross over but I a, disappointed

I stop reading right after Erza went vanished woth Naruto. Thought this fic is avlut Konoha becoming a dark guild but tiltle really is misleading. Stupid Shikamaru revealing too much information and I know how idiot Naruto could be sometimes but it doesn't mean he had to tell Erza he's a shinobi.

It would be better if Konoha is in fact a guild instead of Shikamaru sprouting out loud about Shinobi to the mages.

alraedy the end? i am so looking forward to read more. so please makes you faster

Slimy...Yet satisfying.
THE LION KING!