Lol. EDI with a handlebar moustache . Good one, I peed myself laughing.

Not literally.

I loved this story!

Oh my god, I have been spending some long time to try find FemShep with Jack, but I never could find it! I'm glad you decided to make this fanfic 3 Love it so far.

This was very cute. I appreciate that there was recognition that people need time to adjust - it makes the whole story seem more whole. And there was a nice ending between Jack and Shepard, too. I do think that Jack would be able to understand without any sort of outburst. Very well done.

Great story though I hope you don't mind me asking but in your story were Jake and Shepard sleeping together or more laying together sorry to say but when you had then together it was very breaf and I wasn't shore what they were doing

Great job on the story! I really enjoyed it!

~~CloudGazer15

Really hoping there is more to this story. Love your Jack and Shepard. The comment Joker made about Samara not threatening to wash Jack's mouth out with soap was hilarious. Spelling and grammar are pleasantly great. Well done.

Really enjoying this so far, looking forward to more

Loled at EDI. Awesome fic so far.

Kinda cute...never would of expected that reaction from Jack.

LMAO! That was a great ending there.

I loved how you resolved Shepard's dilemma. That was perfect! And Jack's response made me chuckle because it was so in character. Great story!

"Just give me a little warning before you tell the crazy convict. I think I'll go hide behind Grunt for a while."

LOVED that line. But damn! Poor Jack.

Oh wow...talk about bittersweet! Loved how Shepard never answered Jack's original question though. That was a very effect means of distraction lol.

This chapter was nicely written. Thought it was in perfect character that Jack would sneak in Shepard's quarters in the middle of the night, triumphant over the puzzle. The ensuing scene was a natural lead into the rest. ;)

Loved the angst in this chapter. It made their discussion a little more intimate adn personal than what the game could reflect. Well done.

Also enjoyed how you wrapped it up at the end and I think the choice of bringing Tali and Garrus along was perfect as this was a trip to be made in the company of old friends who could understand just how much this meeting would mean. Great job.