JUST FROM THE SONG ALONE I ALLREADY LOVE THIS :D greaaat job!

Nawww...

This story was beautifully written and had quite a gorgeous storyline. ) Loved it.

I liked that a lot! One thing: It's kind of strange to refer to Remus as 'the blonde haired boy' when it's in his POV for most of the story then it switches to 3rd person-ish at the end which is a little choppy feeling.

I really liked it though. They emotion from Remy at the beginning was really powerful.

Shocked and appalled that you only got three reviews for this!

This was measured and gentle and thoughtful. wonderful.

Oh my god, that was so sweet! I especially loved the last line, "with a promise of 'together' hanging in the air.' Can I just take a time out and say that if I were ever as good an author as you, I'd die happy?

Haha, so before I get on to rambling about how wonderful this is and how honored I am that this was for me, I got to ask, was this story meant to tell me something? Lol, seems like it, possibly.

ANYWAYS... This was great, really. Just so painfully sweet and beautiful and just... I'm lost for words. I really don't know what to say.

I loved how Remus prayed that Sirius would love him, even while he was drowning in self disgust... he still held some hope. I really loved how Remus needed Sirius, not just wanted him, and of course Sirius would feel the same :)

and I loved these lines... "If I could take it for you, Remus, you know I would. In a heartbeat." The perfect thing to say just before a kiss.

Great story, really. Thank you. And I loved James' part in it at the end :D

Sigh, I love them. It was very good, favorited.