Reviews for Hard Bargain
Guest chapter 4 . 6/21/2016
One of the worst stories I have ever came across just dumb
SHINeenya chapter 4 . 3/7/2016
I thank you very much for the gratitude you have bestowed on us for the ending -
Very satisfied
But it would have been interesting if Grimm and Nel had fought and then Aizen switching his thoughts and be like " Ya'll can live. Scurry on my loyal subjects" XD Loved it though!
SHINeenya chapter 3 . 3/7/2016
it was getting so good... and Halibel had to come and ruin it..
SHINeenya chapter 2 . 3/7/2016
oooommmmmggg. this is getting goood!
SHINeenya chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
Oh shit. It's about to go down! Loved it
Please send me messages chapter 3 . 1/21/2015
Woe
Audlie chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
I liked the story but it should really be posted as a Grimm/Nel story. Kinda disappointed that it wasn't a Nnoitra/Nel but an all together good read :)
g chapter 3 . 8/7/2012
pathetic
anon chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
so why on earth is this in Nnoitra x Neliel? It's GrimmNel, after all...
Instant Maou chapter 4 . 7/9/2011
Wonderful! I loved it! Especially how they trashed the place xD Good job!

/applauds
Dagger-Wielding Gorilla chapter 4 . 7/1/2011
That was very good. I especially liked chapter 3 (my favorite part was when Grimmjow decided to end Nnoitora after Nelliel left him to live in shame - he would just try to get her again later.)
Valtimur chapter 4 . 2/15/2011
It was a great read. I had so much fun with Nnoitra beating the crap out of Neliel, don't ask me why. I've always felt like he should eventually pay her back for looking down on him. I did feel a bit bad about the scale of her molestation though, since descriptions were quite graphic.

I also liked how Grimmjow turned against Nnoitra in the end, even though it was fun having them in tense dialogues, hehe. They're the biggest potty mouths ever, no doubt.

Anyhow, I'm not a fan of Grimmjow x Nel but I guess they do fit together.. pretty well I'd say.. He kept his word and got her out of the hot water, and she's the loyal type, so...

Well, they settled the score with Nnoitra, so that's that.. Poor Nnoitra, I had to read you die for a second time. And lol'ed at the Aizen x Ichimaru insinuations.

You should make a story with Harribel and Neliel torturing/raping Grimmjow. Preferably bondage, if you know what I mean..

That's all. Keep up the good work!
HowI'vemissedyou chapter 2 . 12/14/2010
Wow just wow
Utopian Moon chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
Nice. I really realllly like the ending of this chapter.
Utopian Moon chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
awesome. Really interesting.
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