Very, VERY well done. I absolutely love Richard's thought process, the dry humor and annoyance literally bounce off the page. Your prose is gorgeous! :D

This sort of insight into a character's mind is just what I've always found lacking in comics, tv, and movies, and I always love it when someone takes the time to write down what they think is going through a character's head. Thank you so much!

is broken. I cannot favorite this story enough times. I need to make a new account so I can favorite this story again.

Seriously. This is the single greatest LFG fanfiction I have ever read, and, in fact, one of the greatest fanfictions of ANY genre I have ever read. You captured Richard perfectly, I think; perhaps better than he is captured in the comic. That psychological mouse scurrying around inside him is a fantastic image, one that has subtly altered my view of the character.

I'm gushing. Suffice it to say that this is freaking fantastic.

Woah, you got into this VERY deep! O_O

Good job.

very nice

This was interesting.