Very interesting story! you must continue!

An Excellent Story! I expected it to take me forever to get through, due to all of the chapters, but it was really a pleasure to read. Keep up the great work!

Damn, that was magnificent. I really have no other words for this story. It was just magnificent. *sniffles* And so sad. I'm not usually one for sappy Kaioshin/Kibito stories, but this one was recommended to me by a friend who read it previously, and I certainly wasn't disappointed. Plus, you treated Kibito sympathetically , so I'm happy. Keep up the great writing!

was amazing. I have never read anything with such magnitude, even from professional authors. I congratulate you.

Hey :) I just wanted to say thanks for all the reviews and read some of ur stuff. Wow, ur even more twisted than I am! Well done! I love the pizza bit :)

MY GOD LADY RIVKA! It's no wonder you have over 100 reviews! Your defintly staying on my favorite author list! I don't know why, but I think this was my favortie part of the story, I usually like it when I finish reading a story, if it has a good ending. Yous story was a 10 out of 10 for sure! WOW!

-Lord KaioShin

Wow! This is such an amazing story! You rule LafyRivka!

"Waaaait a sec, you’re nowhere near powerful enough to do THAT."

Ha! KaioShin can take anyone down, or at least I think so!

I love the way you ended this final chapter, minus the epilouge! I wish my story was as good as this!

-Lord KaioShin

P.S. Chapter 6 is up on my story!

Told you I would come back. I always keep the promises I make, and try not to make promises I can't keep.

As always, I'm still shocked this story doesn't have more reviews. I never got over that. Oh well, it's still a joy to read. I find I love the way you go into it, painting us a picture of the past of KaioShin-Kai. You were one of the first...although, I'm not sure if I count or not...kinda hard to say there. ::sigh:: Oh well, I will return.

You know what I find interesting about this first chapter? You can already see your love for irony. It's there in the sentence about the Namae-nai rebellioins being killed by groups of vaganond Zatta. The two lower class races would be that way.

Very intriguing, and this first chapter easily catches the reader's attention into the story. I'll try to review as I can, but I will come back here.

Wow. That last chapter was... great. I can't believe that Kibito would hold a grudge for that long, though. Poor Kaioshin. I can't believe you killed them off, to. Well, I guess you kileld them off. Well, wonderful stuff, anyway. There are way too many full stops here.

Wow wow wow wow.

I love that fic... it was soooo cool.

Yay. Good for you. It's cool. You can really write.

Bye bye.

~Bexi~

Woah what an ending, amazing, awww the Universe has come to an end *sniff* along with this fic *sniffle* but it still was an wonderful ending, it was very powerful and moving, I almost shed a tear (that's near impossible to make me do) I don't know about anyone else but I thought it was quite an unexpected ending, for some reason I didn't expect you to end at the end of it all (does that make sense?) I'm glad you did though, it made it more unique.

I also like the reference to the Pheonix, it has got to be one of my favourite mythological creatures, I love myths in general so I love the odd reference to it here and there

WELL DONE *claps loudly*

HA pizza burn, awwww poor Kaioshin, although yes pizza's can be very dangerous if not treated with proper respect

I know many people like long chapters but I'm one of the few who like quite short ones, thats why my chapers tend to be quite short on the whole, this length chap was perfect for me

how sweet, Kibito hogging the blanket 'snigger'

I really like where we find out about Kibito's past, that was very well done, I don't think there are any other fics that explore his past, I guess that sort of looking back is what makes your fic so unique

Hoeee...thinking about the end of the universe makes me sad...even if you do start over. *sigh* But that is just me..;) Demo, this was a beuatiful fic. Deep, moving, and hannyaaannnn!~ all the way through. I can see why Kent likes this so much...almost as much as I did!

sum up: HONTOU NI SUGOI!