| Reviews for For the Love of Fire Princess |
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lynarizsajise1 chapter 6 . 6/5 Update? It’s great so far! |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/26 This is great keep writing! |
Phoenix Invictus chapter 6 . 4/5 After so many years it's probably in vain, but I hope someday you'll continue this. If there's one thing I really hate, it's seeing stories with so much potential being left unfinished. Especially since I know from your other works that you have the skill to manifest that potential onto the page. Best of luck to you, regardless. |
Ibskib chapter 6 . 1/25 I really hope you come back to this someday, you managed to turn Azula into someone quite endearing without changing her character too much, and I really want to see her get a happy ending. One another note please cut out those (x) referring to end notes, they serve as a distraction when reading the story. It's usually a bad idea to break the fourth wall with anything, no matter how slight. |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/25 "Let me have a look." She had, indeed been bitten" But where was she bitten? Might seem unimportant, but vagueness rarely helps immersion. |
typo chapter 3 . 1/25 She was the same clothes - She was wearing the same clothes |
editing chapter 3 . 1/25 It's pretty immersion-breaking to have AN references in the text like (1) etc. If you find it important add it to the story, otherwise just remove the references and explain more fully in the AN, don't do this halfway thing. |
typo chapter 3 . 1/25 give my brother to - give my brother time to |
typo chapter 3 . 1/25 pleasent - pleasant |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25 a decent general idea what - a decent general idea about what |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25 Or, as the saying goes, else - Or, as the saying goes, 'or else' |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25 typo went their - went there |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/17/2019 This story is most likely abandoned, but damn it was a good (if short) ride |
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 11/17/2018 shame this wasnt continued, your SI makes for quite the affably evil character |
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 11/17/2018 it should be cool to see our "hero"'s first interaction with aang, especially as they appear to be on good terms later on if the notes are any indication |