| Reviews for When Up Becomes Down |
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   KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 7 . 11/10/2013 That last line nearly killed me ! XD |
| WritersxBlock101 chapter 7 . 7/20/2013 this is agreat story and I know it has been years since you updated but I hope you try to again soon :D ! |
| Lumina The Wolf chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 i really have high hopes for this story |
| Lumina The Wolf chapter 7 . 6/20/2013 i very much like this story it has much in the way of muchness except... i fear that it has been forgotten :( |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/7/2013 Please update soon! I love it so mug you really captured the essence of Underland! |
| BobtheFrog chapter 7 . 1/17/2012 This. THIS. Wow...so hot yet adorable, intriguing and delightful...there is just one thing that is wrong...I NEED MORE! Please? *puppy-dog face* |
| fierynightangel chapter 7 . 1/3/2012 sorry bout rl being hectic. it seems to be skipping over me completely atm. can't wait for more though! hope the teaching is going well! |
| Neliel Tu Oderschvank Espada 3 chapter 7 . 12/7/2011 oh god more please this is so good i can't wait to find out what will happen next |
| bingowildshadow chapter 7 . 7/16/2011 Hatter is adorable. I like the idea of the plot too, it sounds interesting and I want to read more. A couple things I would say for improvement: if something happens in more than one chapter, you don't have to draw attention to it everytime, like Alice touching his cheek. My suggestion is to just leave it at that. I do love that you remembered so much stuff from the movie though, that's great! And you did a good job actually capturing emotions, and not giving them excuses to feel one way or another, like a lot of people do. They have a reason to feel guilty, and they do. Which is great, so good job, and please write more! _ |
| Pheonix Autumn chapter 7 . 11/13/2010 U P DA T E! |
| Ryutana chapter 7 . 9/13/2010 AWWWWWW! I love this story so far, and I really hope to read more soon. I think the lemons should wait a bit longer, myself, at least until after they've really developed their relationship. Still, it is your story, do what you wish. ~Ryutana |
| PhoenixWytch chapter 7 . 7/19/2010 *squees* This is absolutely amazing! I cannot believe I have not read this before now. Thank you for writing this wonderful piece. I so look forward to reading more. |
| WhiteWolfLegend chapter 7 . 7/1/2010 Oh i love please update soon :) |
| AtTheBeginningWithYou1995 chapter 7 . 6/10/2010 AWESOME! I really love how Tarrant is head over heels for her. In some fics its only about the sex, but for him its like they were meant to be together and their taking it slow. |
| hiyafolks chapter 7 . 6/1/2010 Thankkies for the cool story... Thanx for making it as long..er...est as poxxible |
