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continue plz!

wow! she actually asked him2 dance with her! i love it!

nice! its good!

Wow, what an ending to this chapter...

I like the situation and set up that seems to be happening in this, it's very in character for the Hori guys. I can't wait to see what happens next...

Also, nice work on keep the characters in character, loved the comments by the Hori guys about the girls especially.

The ending was superb! Your story had me drawn in all the way til the end, though you should go on with this one though. I want to know how Kanako and Yano end up to be, if Yano is going to use her all the way until the game has started. It has me thinking of what will happen next, nicely done!

oh... Yano isn't looking so good now, with the evil plan in place... But I LOVE this story and all that's going on in it. The part at the end was intersting to say the least, a little out there, but in the end it made sense. The part where she blantly asked Yano out made me get huge butterflies and blush for her! I usually only do that when something embaressing happens on tv, this is the first time it's happen while reading! I actually closed the screen to blush! So fanstatic job with getting the characters in perspective for me. I can't wait for the next part!

So, this was really awesome. You know I was totally lovin' them talking about their awesome time at the party. Oh Yano, you know you secretly don't want to be a terrible person like Ken wants you to be.

But seriously dude, freaked the fuck out by the whole schizophrenia shit at the end. Are we completely sure Kanako has not gone crazy? Anyways, awesome chapter. Like seriously. My favorite part was the practice stuff, thought I'm sure you probably knew that. Bring on the rest.../ire.

Looks good, I like the background and set up for Kanako and her new situation and how you used a real life event, the party, to make things happen. Everyone was in character here and it was an enjoyable read. I look forward to your next chapter!

Kanako letting Yano have his way very smooth, very sultry, and even sexy. *nods* I love it, I absolutely love this story. And I don't mind waiting awhile for new chapters~

I laughed and smiled through the whole thing. And according to Taty, I leaned closer and closer to the screen as I went XD Awesome, awesome, AWESOME chapter. I'm glad you got it up here :) You can't have part B without partaaaaaayyyyyyy :D And Izumi's dislike of physics gave me a good laugh. Ugh. Just amazing overall.

Looks good so far, I like the opening and your treatment of the characters thus far. This story poses an interesting take on Kanako and what her life is like and it's cool that you're writing a story to explore this further. I look forward to the next chapter!

Ohh!~ I already like how this is starting! All the little details make it that much better and I can't wait for more!

And you're going to Anime Central? Sweet! I might be going, if I can pull enough money together for it and adjust my costumes. (Plus I have to run it by some other people too to see if they're going)

I have been waiting for this story.

For-ev-er.

It's off to a great start, a very great start. You explained things really well.

I want moar shippage from the rest of the team, but I shall wait, because I know this story is for kanako

ACENwoot! I think we should make Alex dress up as a Hori boy when we're tami and kanako. just a thought.

Dude, update again when you're not swamped with school. :D