I really liked this whole fanfiction. Even though it was more erotic than the fanfictions I normally read (or write) I loved the whole sentiment of the story. You really showed a mature Draco, even a more mature Lucius. Every scene just seemed to scream Draco, so very well done. I love how protective he is of Astoria as well.

Well done :)

Wow, they really publish all kinds of stories on here, don't they? I'm glad, because it gives people with remedial writing skills the chance to improve.

Judging by this story, you've got a long way to go, but the important thing is that you're actually trying to improve...good for you! Lots of people would be embarrased at their lack of skill, but you keep striving...I have no doubt that in 5-6 years, you'll be able to write something that's almost decent.

Keep on rocking!

i like this story - its actually quite interesting and a bit sweet too

~Mikado xx

That was a really good story - good plot buildup, and great characterization. I love how Narcissa Malfoy's able to calm down little Scorpius so easily. And I also love the first part, where Draco's basically begging his son to give him some peace. Great job!

just reread this for the 3rd or 4th time, maybe more! gorgeousgorgeousgorgeous. bless you.

Aww...I love it!

Loved it! favorite Draco/Asteria story to date. I was reading your other work, your a great writer!

this was so good, i wasnt expecting the crisis point with scabior, you should continue with this idea of them always hiding in Russia. it would make a really exciting story! :)

i like this it is very interesting please keep writing that would be awesome :)

astoria is awsome. i think you really captured draco. much nicer and calmer and really loves his family, but still not totaly unwilling to use unforgivables and still really does like his father.

Loved this one, I think it might be my favorite Draco/Asteria one yet. I really enjoyed Draco's protectiveness. The "lemons" were perfectly hot. I thought the pensive mention seemed a little casually thrown in there-maybe you go into more detail in another story? Overall, great though.

GAH! This story was so good I read it twice! It had everything, sweet moments, dark moments, sexy moments! I always enjoy your writing.

This was one of the nest Draco/Asteria I have read for quite a while! The pensieve was a very good idea- so original. Everything he hadn't told her but at the end she knows everything. Great story;)

Oh wow , I am stuck in my fanfic cause I already wrote the love scene but can't manage to post it (Since I think it sucks.. not literally though XD) Yours is much much better.

The most powerful part was Draco and his son ..too cute "Your killing me"

I can't write as good as you , does it come this easily to you I wonder ?

loved it!