This is tragically beautiful. It's sad, but it's also powerful.

The way you write the tie between Jimmy and Abby is perfect. You do a great job showing how much they love each other, and how much Jimmy cares for Abby, and how important to her he is. He keeps her from becoming lost; keeps her grounded.

This was very well written, and I especially like the opening sentence. Wonderful job.

Hope you get more comments and views on this, because a piece like this deserves to be noticed.