| Reviews for Dark Over Light |
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Leefa chapter 17 . 3/22/2018 Fun story |
madhatress1314 chapter 10 . 9/19/2010 yis this rated m u skipped over a important part that makes me a perv doesnt it? |
IrisOcean chapter 17 . 9/19/2010 You're up to something, aren't you? I wonder what it might be... We'll just have to wait and see I suppose.. |
IngloriousShosanna chapter 17 . 9/18/2010 oh god! not a sad story, please! aww i love these two so much, and this story! |
SML chapter 16 . 9/9/2010 This has nothing to do with this story, but another. PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE UPDATE FADING LIFE! Please don't be one of the authors who give up on their City of Ember fic's just because there arn't that many Ember fic's/fans on FanFiction, and the fans of your story are waiting, so please, please update soon or they might get tired of waiting. |
Jewel Magix chapter 16 . 8/2/2010 Awwwww... the ending is so sweet!-jewel |
Ranguvar27 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010 This is going to be a review of the whole story. It was very well written. I like the fact that you had Alice and Stayne gradually realize that they did actually love each other. Alice's hesitation is understandable-but I'm of the belief that Stayne is actually quite the gentleman underneath everything, and your story did a good job of showing that. Kudos too for making Tarrant a villain, and still making it believable. His anger is understandable, and in a way-so are his actions. But I am glad Julius was OK. I love stories where Stayne is given a chance to develop from what we saw in the movie, and yours did a very good job of that. |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 16 . 7/23/2010 sorry but i just cant help it sooo...FUCK STAYNE!FUCK ALICE! *breaks down into tears* |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 15 . 7/23/2010 NO!NOT TARRANT NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! SORRY BUT GOD AM I PISSED!so sorry for my violant review but he couldnt die:~(anyway love how you pull all these emotions with te characters:) |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 14 . 7/23/2010 down with kingsliegh UP WITH HIGHTOPP! |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 13 . 7/23/2010 oh what is wrong with me i have never had a breakdown like this ever before!but dont blame yourself thats the last thing i want. never read a book quite like ths(again that is a compliment) |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 12 . 7/23/2010 SHIT! i had lost consiousness for a moment but dont worry i am always stressed wwith how stories will end and do that |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 10 . 7/23/2010 damn stayne! the hatter deserves love not stayne! |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 9 . 7/23/2010 i read this and went pale and woosy i never knew stories could have this effect on me! bravo your the first person to do that:) (thats a compliment) |
BeanieBabay890 chapter 8 . 7/23/2010 sorry if i say it way to much but...SHIT! |