Good job on this one-shot, so cute 3

I..i want that life...

lol

Great story!

omg that was so sweet :)

I had to wait till now to read this lovely little gem. Don't worry I'll get to your last fic when I'm not quite so tired.

You made this really natural and I enjoyed the normal aspect you got across. It was a man coming home to his boyfriend after a day at work. Although Tsume as a firefighter gives me way too many ideas. Ideas and plot bunnies. *laughs* I'd love more from this series and from this particular world if you have the time and plot bunnies.

In my opinion they could have made an entire second season based in Paradise. I would have watched it like the semi-rabid fan I became watching this series. Made me cry but I loved it anyway.

Now I really need to go to sleep. That does not mean grab a book and booklight and read for another hour. I hope not anyway. Gods I hate summer break. I have too much cursed free time to read.

Aw what a cute story. :3

Thank you Sophie :D

It's very cute and I love it. Short and sweet. It fit well with the song.

I like how you snuck Blue in there. At least she made it to paradise.

Too Cute

D'aw, this is cute. (And Tsume/Bike is my crack OTP, just so you know.) ;)

Ah! So KAWAI! Please!Please do me a favor and don't let this stay a oneshot! please, your interpretation of those two is just too sweet! - And you really have only written ONE story up until now? Well, to say at least, I really did feel tsume's exhaustion, so you did a good job with expressing this emotion. To say I'm finished now with critizising(praising) you would be a lie, but this review is as long as it is already... sry if I wasted your time...

Oh, btw: FIRST! YAY!

P.S: Thx, reading a little Tsume/Toboe again really made my day!