Beautifully written and wonderful angst!

Love this!

Oh shut Mustang. You messed up big time!

Awww. It was always sort of part of my headcanon that Ed's reports were horribly messy because of the whole right-hand/left-hand dilemma, but I've never actually stopped to think about how Mustang might have reacted the first time he got one. I'm both impressed and glad to see someone has actually thought to write this!

Fantastic! :3

Dash

I liked this, is it going to continue into something more, or are you keeping it a oneshot? Either way it's good.

I'm amazed at how you so adeptly blend humor with seriousness in your stories. You have the usual banter, than bam! Something that reminds you that Ed isn't like everyone else, that he has struggles that most people don't even think about. You make the readers feel like your characters do, and that is a gift.

Aw... I was a little confused at first why Ed was so reluctant, but I figured it out pretty fast as soon as he started writing... Another automail issue. Good writing.

Aw, so good!

Will there be more?

Oh. I liked this. My hand (well, both hands) has been broken during school so I had to write with my left hand when I'm right-handed. I hated that. I has always terrified me that in old days lef-handed people were forced to write with right hand. I wouldn't endure that.

Sry for this stupid comment.

i love this so much. It's amazing!

AH! *cough cough* sorry, i just had to get that out. thats was TOO amazing! thats JUST how Hiromu would have done it if she had done a shoet story of it... in fact *nudge nudge* if you don't mind (and i totally understand if you don't let me!) i would LOVE to make this into a strip. it would make my year! (this is my DA account baconinthesoap64./ ) i would credit you for the story and set up a link for it in the artists comments! PLEASE!

LOVE IT!

that was really good! . i think there should another chapter.

oohh my. i loved wat u did here. :D

yay ive been waiting for someone to write a story about this

nice start:D