| Reviews for Lonely Souls |
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EsotericGhost chapter 3 . 12/18/2011 No! You have to make a 100,000 word Simon/Kable story! I love the way you write! You must write more! |
EsotericGhost chapter 4 . 12/18/2011 It must live on! What of their first arguments! Their first hardships! Their first awkward situations! Won't Kable want to be part of his child's life? (he has a kid right?) You HAVE TO CONTINUE! |
EsotericGhost chapter 3 . 12/18/2011 No! You have to make a 100,000 word Simon/Kable story! I love the way you write! You must write more! |
EsotericGhost chapter 2 . 12/18/2011 Oh my Gods! This Story can't be OVER! I really want a sequel please! |
EsotericGhost chapter 1 . 12/18/2011 I love this story! |
ThistleL chapter 4 . 8/7/2011 Interesting to read! I like Simon's voice, his desperation and insights the most. I liked the fic, but I think you could have possibly explained some points better, like why they needed each other (I know it *is* obvious why, but using your lovely voice to expand it would have been awesome!) and why Kable was just as bad off... I like how you used the differences between the two characters! It was awesome to picture this 6 foot guy with a 5'8 guy... It also seemed to reflect their ages too, which was neat. My favorite part of the entire fic has to be Chapter Three, towards the end when the two speak about the game and Player - literally gave me shivers to remember their dynamics. That Simon had the power and Kable is accepting of that...or I could be running away with it. XD I just loved that part. It made me happy to read, extremely happy. :) Wonderful job! :) |
UglyTruth chapter 4 . 7/2/2011 You, my friend, could have easily taken this story endlessly. There can never be enough of this pairing when written as brilliantly as you did. But I understand that multi-chapters are pretty challenging and the way you left this story actually works out quite well. It's realistic, it's sexy and featuring two people who are extremely different characters but complement each other so well. Great job! I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for posting this. |
Accountkiller0000000000000000 chapter 3 . 5/28/2011 I just watched the movie today and now I'm reading all the Kable/Simon fics I can find. I really loved your fic and how you made the connection between the two come alive. Very sweet and also very hot. |
unusedaccount1177 chapter 4 . 5/6/2011 Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. For all four chapters. It was awesome. I loved it. Keep writng. |
Tread Softly chapter 4 . 2/25/2011 *screams a little* I only recently watched Gamer, but I IMMEDIATELY got sucked into the intoxication that is Kable/Simon. And I am SO glad I found this fic! I LOVED IT! It's very...I don't know how to explain it, very VISCERAL. REAL. It makes Simon and Kable so tangible, somehow. And of course the way you wrote them was very passionate and the intimate scenes left me in need of a cold shower. BRAVO! Adding to favorites ;) |
SuperSonicLoveMuffin chapter 4 . 9/2/2010 Awwwww _ Like wat a perfect wayy to end it. Their so Cute together Tehe |
aku-sensei chapter 4 . 7/12/2010 it was really good. i think kableXsimon is an adorable couple. i really liked your story. |
lost in pale blue chapter 4 . 7/12/2010 This is several kinds of awesome :D There's hardly any Simon/Kable in the world, so thanks x infinity for writing this! |
UnravellingThread chapter 4 . 6/15/2010 I'm surprised there's not much Gamer fics. o_o I liked this, even more so since it's Complete. It was a good read both Simon and Kable are hot. X3 Great job! |
xoko chapter 4 . 5/21/2010 I have a question.. Simons father was questioning Kable about how much time he would stay.. And he answered... Then simon ask and them were together, smashing each other in front of Simons father? You never told us that he went away... |