This is really great. I love the language and the set up, especially the line Thunder again tumbled and rolled in somersaults very beautiful and poetic. And the story is cutesy and perfectly Teslen.

Slainte
Hobbit

love your stories, and nikola lol, i totally can see him doing that just to impress Helen xD

love the final

The end bit was a bit cheesyy but i liked it! I Lol'd when I read the word leprecchauns!

Haha! Will was soo shocked to hear her giggle! Oh and I loved the bit about John and the mistletoe! SO? Did he do it?

Waaa...

I really love this story that's just perfect !

You write this exactly as I would like read this.

So, thanks and good continuation

(and sorry for my poor english)

Hahaha, i love it. Hmmm, just curious, but could there be a sequel? They find the Leprechuans! (and i am absoulutley certain i have not spelt most of the past words right lol) And well, they aren't exactly friendly and Nikola and Helen get into a little bit of trouble...

Then again there is also them going back to the Sacntuary, but i think the Leppie (as i shall now refer them as) would be both Dramatic and utterly hilarious.

Anyway, with that suggestion out, it was really well written, i now want to go Italy even more now, go kiss the Blarney Stone and hope that i one day get lucky and have someone as seriously awesome as Nikola mwaahahahaha. bahahaha lol, you can ignore that crazy late-at-night half-asleep admission lol :)

As per usual you writing and story is fantastic! :) :D

ahaha this was cute and THEN we got henry and will's reactions and it got hysterical lol

Ha ha ha, brilliant fic. Loved this so much.

I simply loved your story! And I loved how Nikola played with lightning just to impress Helen, and loved the banter between the two- you write them perfectly. I also loved Henry and Will's reaction when they realised what happened- this story was a great work from the beginning to the end!

Aw that was so cute _ I love how Niko plays with lightning at that one part just b/c he felt like it, and I love how he was all caring when he realized that Helen was cold *squee* Adorable.

luv,

Miss Pookamonga aka Mimzy ;p

Aw, this story was absolutely adorable! It was definitely light and sweet, no one was in mortal peril!

What I really loved about this was the banter. It was perfect! Will and Henry were hilarious, stocking up on wine and warning the others about Vlad. Lol. Although, I'm wondering what would have happened if they did find any leprechauns...Oh well.

You wrote Helen and Nikola adorably. Gah, now I'm in a sappy mood! Thanks for that!

Wonderful, wonderful fic! :D

Hey there,

This is a TERRIFIC job on the story. Fantastic, really interesting and FANTASTIC! I love your work.

Melissa

"Nikola sighed heavily as he carefully wiped his hands on his kerchief while Helen attempted to not stare and imagine the wonders those hands could work"

"Sorry Nikola but you are not the first person to discover fire,"

Helen turned to find Nikola standing beside her, also changed, and before she could say anything he had wrapped her tightly in a blanket.

"So did you two get lucky and find the leprechauns on the first try?" Will asked.

"We got lucky alright." Nikola quipped

"You should kiss the stone and hope you find a way to meet my needs as far as wine goes."

"I think I'm going to kiss the stone and hope that I find a way to fit your ego in the Sanctuary…"

At risk of quoting your whole story I'll stop there! But to summarise - a hint of gutter, some nice humour and ofc some fluff! Loved it :)