| Reviews for Fluctuating Hearts |
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Kirani56 chapter 4 . 8/27/2016 These stories are very adorable :D thanks for writing them! |
Shadow Cat17 chapter 4 . 8/31/2013 I really enjoyed reading these! They are so cute! |
Resha04 chapter 4 . 6/13/2012 I have to admit I jawdropped when I read the beginning, where Romano dated Ludwig. I was like "WHUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTT?" That aside, I really love this one too. It was funny how Romano loves Fin and Sve's ice creams so much that "but to mistake Tino and Berwald's ice cream was practically a sin. End of story." XD I also love how people in the ice cream shop were all like fussing over Romano and his broken relationship with Ludwig. It was so sweet of them to be all mother-hen to him :DDDDDD |
Resha04 chapter 3 . 6/13/2012 Wow... I'm-I'm speechless. Both because of you and the chapter. This chapter is really amazing. I love how the usual role (Romano-art Antonio-viewer) is reversed in this one. I also love how they met(over the internet and in person). I'm very very very amazed of how you see an artwork. The painter will be the happiest person in the world if there's a person, even one, that can understand the feelings in his artwork. :) |
Resha04 chapter 2 . 6/13/2012 Oh my... I love how Romano is being a real businessman here, without his vocabulary. He knows when to use them and when not to. And I love Francis and Gilbert. They are both very hilarious XD |
Resha04 chapter 1 . 6/13/2012 This is really...real. Those feelings Lovi has are very human, how he was jealous because he wasn't an only child anymore, but he couldn't help but love his brother. I really love how the angst here is very real. And I think everyone are in character. I love the not-friends relationship between Lovi and Gilbert XD |
Kagimine chapter 1 . 8/4/2011 Ugh, you should have had Lovino drown DX |
SuperNekofan chapter 4 . 4/20/2011 Cute! Can't wait for more! |
neonnex chapter 3 . 3/10/2011 These short stories are so...so amazing! Simply amazing! They are all such cute and original stories, as well as being very well written, that I find myself reading them over and over again, especially 'Blog' and 'Ice Cream'. But I would say that 'Blog' is my personal favorite of the four :) Probably because I feel like I can relate to Antonio's side of the story somehow...anyway!~ Thank you for writing these and again, awesome job! |
The Second Side of Happiness chapter 3 . 6/10/2010 Hello~ Okay, so first, these little one-shots are freakin' adorable. And second, Antonio's birthday is on February 12 .-. Sorry if my being technical is annoying, its just my personality Kyukyukyu |
animus-furandi chapter 4 . 3/31/2010 I really can't believe that you say you don't know a lot about Hetalia... everything about this little series was amazing and perfect. Your characterization was head-on, nobody was OOC at *any* time... even the times in which you said you altered their personalities to fit the story were in-character. My favorite oneshot was... well actually I liked "Blog" and "Calculator" equally because I'm a tech freak. I mostly liked the ideas you used on how Lovino and Antonio got together - so cute! I don't know if you personally believe what you had Lovino say, about the Internet being a place where you can be yourself without getting hurt, but I wholeheartedly agree with you. The only huge mistake I noticed was in "Ice Cream" where you wrote Tino as Toni more than once. Both times were during the Christmas party scene. But otherwise, your writing style, conventions, punctuation, etc, was all perfect. Your style is actually one I find to be very easy to read. I love the way that your writing is so personal, as opposed to "this happened, then that happened, then they kissed." It has *life* in it. Does that make sense? I hope it does because this entire series was very enjoyable. Overall, this was a fantastic read. Thank you so much for posting this, and keep up the good work! |
FluffyCakes chapter 4 . 3/31/2010 Nghh your stories are so. good. |
Fanficitonlover4allfiction chapter 4 . 3/30/2010 LOL WAIT WHUT :D? LOVI IS OLDER THAN LUDWIG! WAIT WHAT! OMG :D Uwa, another beautiful story~ You are just so amazing at writing! |
Sue chapter 3 . 3/29/2010 Your story are so special,and I love them so much!:-)Please continue! |
Fanficitonlover4allfiction chapter 3 . 3/29/2010 BLOG: potatobastard. tumblr. com LOL RP BLOG FOR LOVINO IS RP without spaces of course :'D /on with reading! DAWW I liked this one :D Like like the background stories were awesome AND PFFT I completely agree with how you can show your true self on the internet xDD I DO IT ALL THE TIME xD okay, not really sure what else to say xD BUT I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS STORY, AND ALL YOUR STORIES FOR THAT MATTER, WITH A BURNING PASSION. OKAY :D 3 |