narutos not that ignorant like he knows that peace doesnt come without pain and hes saying shit about following ones dreams but his dreams were to bring peace? other than being hokage that is but like in chapter 3 he says following ones dreams are good or some shit but in the beginning hes given up? this story contradicting as fuck smh

Unworthy story

Hello there, loving your fic,
Honestly I majorly don’t like genderbender fanfics, exactly because of the fact that they run over the psychological effects of suddenly changing genders, usually they just go: “oh I’m a girl now and that’s it” so fast it spoils the story for me.
The fact that it takes time, and that Naruto is struggling over it, still calling himself “he”, because for him he’s still male even if his body is female, makes the story more interesting and more real to me. Body dysmorphia is a real thing, not feeling that your body is right for you.
That’s why the way you are taking this story is amazing!

I’m digging this story so far!

That's bullshit

First of all, there's waaay too many unnecessary details. And i don't get how Naruto, knowing full well he time travelled to fix shit, completely lost his personality and became an absolute maniac threatening everyone and everything. it doesn't make any sense at all.

Too much use of pronouns that it is nigh unreadable, author too keen on making the descriptions dramatic.

She, He, it ... etc. make up your mind and stick to one.

Interesting~

The middle of this chapter confused me the heck out. Otherwise pretty awesome. Young little H? Bring it.

Kyaa! So much happens and is happening! I'm having a difficult time keeping track sometimes. Again so much happens in one Chapter, and the details are awesome. Really like the way your using and creating the characters.

Love the details you add to the fic, I like how you explain how Naru is doing and everything.

Nice. The only thing I'd say is Naruto isn't his usual knucklehead self, which makes sense so not really a complaint... Besides some wording nothings really 'wrong'. I like what you've done so far.

I'm really enjoying this so far and it's only the first chapter.
Any chance of sending me the URL to the 'Isane' fic you mentioned?

omg! Your shuriken doesn't hurt me you weak human girl. best shit I've read in a while

Reading your author's note touched me... and then made me laugh XD. "Typically socially hopeless people of science" the poor people haha. I wonder how this project is doing now, maybe the project is still ongoing... Unfortunately, my laptop is already slow as it is (it may or may not have malware...) so this program probably won't be good for it. But in the future, when I get a new one, I'll try to help!