Reviews for Naruto Goketsu Monogatari: Uzumaki Ichizoku |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Alright I liked this story please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. I look forward to seeing how you develop your ideas and plot lines. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story, I'm looking forward to how you develop it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() clearly a more interesting take on the story i like but feel the story needs more explaining threw story, conversations, and actions than just first person explanations |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea and the story. Parts of it are pretty cheesey in that they've been done about a million times. And Sasuke's and Sakura's attitudes toward Naruto changed way too fast and without a major catalyst to explain it. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like our fic and look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story u have here...Nice grammar and I think It'll develop into a nice plot too (I hope). I always like when Naruto, or any other of the characters can be strong, by mastering the basics, I always thought it was important. Nice to see it here... Nothing much to say for now. Waiting for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, interesting story you have here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What team will he have? |