Reviews for Unnoticed
kairitheseventhprincessofheart chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Oh. My. Gosh.

... I am too completely amazed and blown away to say anything coherent except that I want to shower praise and adoration on this beautiful story. I loved it so much- it was just something in your writing style maybe, in your choice of words... The ending, beginning, and middle; I loved it all.

I love namixas, but I recently can't find myself getting into the pairing, however, then this gorgeous piece completely drew me in.

Definately a favorite.
KeytoDestiny chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Oh... you have to tell me what happened to Namine... what happened to her...?

I love how you wrote this. I always feel these kinda relationships, the ones that are unspoken but mutual, are strongest. It's like you have this strong connection. X3

Really sad, but beautiful. Thank you for writing it!

And please please please tell me what happened to Namine ;_: I can't live with myself if I don't... ;;
lilaclia chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Short but really good. I love the bus idea, it's different each time. The was you wrote this, with both of their POV's changing and the reader having to guess who's POV it is, was creative and great. I just can't help but wonder ... what caused her to stop taking teh bus? Did anything ever happen .. ? You're leaving me hanging here, please just continue it for at least one more one-shot. Great ending, leaving it there though:) Great Job ! :)
Senorita Cumberbatch chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
aww~ I liked it. I like how this went and I notcied a nor 'complete' tag so I will check this out again next update~