I have read a -lot- of Zemyx in the past month. I've been on bend you could say. And I can easily say that this fanfic is easily in the top 5 that I have read. Your characterizations are amazing, I really love your Zexion and Demyx. I am especially impressed how you could have Zexion soften, yet still keep that distinct...him-ness. Far, far too often I see him turn into a character that resembles his usual self only in name. Clearly, that is not a problem here. You did wonderful and I am definitely going to look into your other fics now!

Re-reading this story again [I absolutely love it. My previous review was pretty lame, but I was incoherent/speechless by this story when I typed it. My apologies.] and I had to review again for your Misery references. I can't believe they went over my head the first time I read this story.

"Marluxia, on the other hand, looked like he'd driven a car into a wreck, crushed his pelvis and been picked up by Annie Wilkes."

Oh man, that and burning Fast Cars. Wonderful, just wonderful!

Love this story, I adored both Ienzo and TerminActor Zexion. Besides the obvious (Demyx's parents) there is not one character in this story that I hate, and I have a fondness for your Luxord and Lexaeus. Those two really need more love.

Gahhh! I LOVED IT! SO MUCH! Everything about it!... well, except one thing. The ending was good but it was more of an ending to a chapter not the whole story. i would have liked to see how the play went. See if Demyx's parents came to it. To just have a chapter maybe two where we all knew that the end was near and it was okay becuase everything was resolved and that way the ending feels more like the ending. Still the ending was amazing, hell, the whole thing was amazing... so yea. This is definately a story that could have a sequel if you want to write one. That would be awesome, amazing, incredible, any other adjective you can think of. So yea. I thought your characters were amazing, you word choice was incredible, basically i loved it. which i've already stated so i see no need to repeat the obvious. Sequel?

A good read, very well-written.

I really enjoyed this story.

I adore the vivid interaction between Demyx and the fabulously characterized Marluxia. I think I know what I'll be doing for the rest of the day. :D

(And I'll be the first to shamelessly admit that this review is mostly an excuse to add you to my favourite author and subscribtion list without having my computer die on me.)

-Cherry

Hello, i gave you my full name because as a writer ive been facing a certain lack of creative stimulation. So i read fanfiction to spark my literary work to life. I just wanted you to know thatyou inspired a writer lost in his dispair with a lovely story. I think that should be the goal of all writers. Anyway before i start to ramble let me just say your work is grand, and i sincerily loved reading it( i can say so because i saved it onto my computer)lol. keep on writing you have the "touch". :) peace!

NOOOOOOO! it can'ts be over what about the play what about... other stuff I liked it too much for it to be over XD love the story sad it's over my inner fangirl is crying cuz parts of it are sooooo sad but I still really liked it

Well, this certainly took me a while to read in its entirety, but I love it! Though I must say, bitch!Zexion was getting a tad irritating. I just never see him that way, so to have that happen, I was like, "urgh! Zexion! Quit being such a douche..."

XD But it's okay. The fact that he opened up to Demyx in the long run makes me super happy. And THE FLUFF AT THE END! You made me a very happy fangirl with that. I'm not gonna lie. I would like to see this taken up a notch with the rating, but I'm gonna just keep that scenario in my head for now. XD I'm such a perv.

Now, I have to mention this. Demyx's parents. WHAT THE HELL ARE THEY SMOKING. To disown Demyx because he didn't conform to what they wanted? They're freaking evil! DEMYX IS TOO CUTE TO DISOWN FOR ANY REASON! TTTT

Anyways, this review was mainly just to say how much I love your fic and wish that I could see it played out in real life. So thank you for writing it. Seriously.

Oh, and before I forget, you made me not hate Larxene! I never thought that would happen!

But lol, I'm rambling now, and I really must go. Can't wait for more time to read some of your other stuff.

Happy writing to you!

-Kuno

That was beautiful. i was blown away at your obvious talent. good job :)

Ong that was soooooo cyute! I especially loved how motherlike marlutia was! And the way zexion slowly cracked just made this story amazing! Woooo

THAT was an amazing read.

Very engaging, and adorable...

Was surprised it wasn't seen through to the end of the play - I was interested to know what happened with Marly and all, but that's a testament to how well you developed your characters in this AU.

Having said that, though - having ended it where you ended it is perfect. Leaves much open to the imagination and is sweet and its not a "happily ever after" with such finality that who have nothing to reflect on.

Am I rambling? I'm sorry. I'm still in awe, perhaps?

Wow, this was really good. It's rare that I feel satisfied with the ending to a fan fiction, and yet I am. Thank you very much for writing this. I think I'm going to go edit some of my work now :3

I agree with Marly!Sex IS an Good way for excercise!

OMG! Such a good story. I'll probally reread this one. I want to write a fanfic and decicate it to you... but I need to finish the ones I've started. I know I'll dedicate a chapter to you for writing such an awesome story. (I loved Axel's nickname. I lol'd everytime I read it.) I really need to write another chapter for my story. I am now inspired to do it. But first I really should do my art project... Bleh 3 point perspective sucks. T_T Well enough of my whining. If I ever get around to an update, I'll PM you so you know. Zemyx forever.

This was, in a word, amazing. I loved it. You almost made me cry between the last two chapters. I don't have any real important comments to give ('cause I really don't feel comfortable critiquing someone so much better than myself), but this story was utterly magnificent. Gah, I couldn't possibly tell you how much I love this story. This has got to be one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing it. We'd be missing out on so much if you hadn't.

~Theresa L'Anne~