Awe I saw will he updated soon and got so excited and then I noticed the last update was 7 years ago

Absolutely brilliant and definitely heart wrenching. The idea of enslaving Jinchuriki is terribly sad yet also an incredible story plot. Your story pulls harshly at the heartstrings—while reading about Naruto’s suffering kills me, this masterpiece is still beautiful to read. I can only hope that one day you will reveal the fluff that is meant to come after...

I hope to one day see this amazing story updated! Absolutely a favorite of mine.

wow its been years since last i checked this out but i guess hope is an ever burning fire.

Soo the next update is when?! Dayum this is a good story,.. love to read more

Interesante n.n

You certainly know how to throw emotional punches. I give you a lot of credit for doing a fair job with such a very out there concept. I only say fair job because this is so far outside my limited understanding of human Psychology that I wouldn’t even hazard a guess as to it’s accuracy.

This is dark, but brilliant.

I sugest you twins update or I’ll hundred years of death your asses ;

Just kiddin ;) (or am I?)
Anyway this is a really interesting spinoff I’ll one hundred percent be reading again and again until
More updates come along. I truly hope you’ve only forgotten to update rather than dropping it completely... thanks for coming up with this complicated plot, you guys are currently my absolute fave authors! Thanks again 3

Please continue this story

I need to see this place burned to cinders AFTER Sasuke somhow gains the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan and puts into use with those secondary characters. I AM surprised he didn't add some tomoes or a Mangekyo right there where Naruto was being tortured...Also, for a moment I also feared that this man was keeping all the jinchuurikis but it's onlyNibi and Kyuubi, right? Poor Naruto and Yuugito, they need plenty of help and patience. Hatake sure has his job cut but now he also counts with his kits help, xd. Seriously, this was brutal.

Wow. This hit me right in the feels.

I really hope you come back to this story. It's sad and heart breaking but absolutely amazing. I'm imagining Yuugito and Naruto and the others all breaking out, just ripping the bastards heads off. I loved how Kakashi beat Toshi and Sasuke for choking Naruto. How pissed off he gets when Naru is mistreated. I gotta wonder if there was any money left in the Namikaze or Uzumaki accounts from Minato and Kushina's time. And I bet Kakashi was willing to throw in all the money he had too even though he wanted to tear the little fuck organ from organ. Again, I hope you continue this story soon.

After reading that end card, I am just shook. It made me want to cry with how Naruto was treated. Actually, it’s the same for Yugito and the other one who’s name I don’t remember. Did Kumo not care about their lost jinchuriki? Bah. Whatever. I look forward to when the update for this is released.

Gosh darn, do I feel like a terrible human being for reading this and enjoying it. Like why?! But also thanks for the really long chapters! Toshi is great, not only does he remind me of Gintama Toshi, but the sarcasm. I'm a rather big fan of sarcasm xD Can't wait for the next update!