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So cute!

Ooh, this is so cute! Sasuke seems like a very affectionate dad! : )

sasuke and the word sweetie do NOT go in the same sentence :D

This is so sweet

omg!luv ur story..my fav character in naruto r sakura and sasuke(sasusaku) too!r u goin to continue dis story?i hope u will)

Aw! I thought that this was really sweet! :)

I've been reading a few of your other stories (cuz they're sasusaku!) and I really like your ideas! But I'm gonna give you a challenge: try to be more descriptive. I know it's hard sometimes if we're in a rush to get an idea or "plot bunny" across, but by elaborating a bit more you can make your story's longer and also make them more real-life/movie-like. Ya know? Like the reader will be able to see the scene in their head the way you want them too. And being descriptive is another great way to add in THE FLUFF FACTOR! Lol

:) kudos! Keep writing, I'll definately be keeping my eye on you (well, your stories that is).

~Soar

So cute :D I loved this one Good work

Cute. :3