I love this one! Please continue! I am loving this story!

I loved that too! Please update this and Graced soon!

Hugs

~ Sarah

Haha. Nice job, Feste! I love Ed, and I love the whole Poets story. Good job once again.

Beautiful chapter

It looks like the Pevensies have their hands more than full with Paravel. I was glad you wrote another chapter about her.

Love this chapter. So cute!

Yay! Another Scene! D I'm actaully surprised that you had Edmund be the flirting monster in this. Most people have him as the awkward dude sitting in the corner. XD Points for creativity!

*suddenly anxious* Peter and Minda /do/ get together, right? I can't quite remember if it's mentioned anywhere - wait, nevermind! Minda's Peter's fiancée at some point during Masks!

I love how Edmund was quite the lady's man in Narnia. I'm not entirely sure why, but that somehow fits my interpretation of Edmund perfectly...

This was a great little story. I hope we get to see more of the Lewis Youngs. Maybe to see how Lewis Sr. gets to become baptized?

Bartholo

Oh, so beautiful. And, I confess, a little heartbreaking - the poor boy! The ending was succinct and well-defined. Perfect. :) I like Lewis a great deal. And based on Susan's reaction to Nora - may I assume that perhaps a revelation of another gift is forthcoming?

Ah, yes. :) Small world. I heard of you through...somebody's favourites. I don't remember who's. :) And I'm /trying/ to get a story finished for Christmas - actually, make that Boxing Day - except my /Longaevi/ decided to drink too much eggnog and eat too much gingerbread and so it'll probably be finished today instead. Maybe.

Lion's Blessing,

Eavis

Happy New Year, and yes, you updated! Great job as usually. It's amazing how many people have talent on here. :)

Great chapter, I don't understand why I didn't get the email saying you'd posted it... ah well! loved it anyway!

What sort of clips? I'd like to read more from you yes.

Oh, goodness! I've been falling behind in reading. Nearly a month after you updated and I'm just now getting around to reviewing. Eek!

As usual, LOVE. Lewis is such an interesting character, and I love the kids.

Oh, and happy belated birthday! )

Oooooh, and I have to agree with Eavis: I'd absolutely LOVE to read more from you, and a blog could actually be a good way to do that. Or email, but that seems like it would be more work, almost, having to email each separate person who's interested... Hm. Well, either way, I love your writing, and the possibility of reading more from you makes me smile. :)

I love your characters! And when Lewis said he didn't think his sisters would forgive him- I just wanted to give him a hug. So sad.

Lovely writing as always :) Keep it up!

Love from,

Charlie

I like how Narnia is kept alive by the future generation. Update soon!