Good very good, keep writting about survivors in crowded citys

A very nice addition to the story.

This is an awesome story; I just knew there would be some survivors in New York. I really like Meghan's background, I feel she's someone I can sympathize with. I also like how you involved quislings; this is the first World War Z fanfic I've seen that involves them.
Overall a great story. Keep writing!

Awesome story. Enjoyed it alot.

Are you sure you didn't hire the author to write this for you? It feels like it fits right into the book. Nicely done.

I thought this was a very interesting story. The details of fortifying the house were welcome, though I'm surprised the windows were never reinforced. As your other reviewer has said, the spelling and grammatical errors are distracting. I also noticed some disconnect with the schools: Meghan is from a 2-parent military family, yet she switches between boarding and private schools. Since they currently live in upstate New York instead of the city or its suburbs, private schools would be less common and very expensive. Is her father ex-military, perhaps? Or if he was on an officer's salary, that could explain the expense. I wonder why he wasn't drafted or recalled though.

Good stuff!

Not bad. Not bad at all. Just some nitpicky stuff. First, there are a few grammar errors here and there. Uncapitalized sentences, a few typos, that kind of thing. Nothing too drastic, but it detracts from the enjoyment of the story.

Also, there is really no reason for Meghan to have no last name. A little nitpicky, but helps for characterization purposes.