Will you continue this fic?

Make more this is really good

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you should write more! its a really good story!

I LOVE these kind of fanfic.

Wow I can't wait to read the next ch.

do you see this (points to eye)? do you SEE this? this is my eye twitch and if you dont update TODAY it will turn into a full body twitch with tragic results!

You write very well, I loved your fic (:

P.S: Leo is maybe just a little OCC (?) anyway, your fic is now in my favorites :)

Oh my goodness, You should continue writing this story is great. would have been amazing if the series continued like this would have put an intersting twist to it.

you're a great writer and i am in LOVE with beast master but, you should really space things out and put more detail into things...it'd really help your story

I feel that you have calmed Leo a little bit too much. He seems too mature for his character. I also think the end was a bit anitclimactic, but work on it and you will have a good story

I think this chapter was fairly good, but you could have done more "show not tell". Alot of this was simply told. I also think Leo wouldn't have simply said "I know your secret" so plainly, but other than that, it was a fairly good chapter

I hope to see the baby soon! please write more!:D :) ;D ;)

omg, i love this story already! please update! i think Leo would be the cuuuuuuutest father ever! update asap plz!

i love your story sooooo much! i just love beast master plz write more!