I love that Luck of the Irish joke you snuck in at the end of chapter three :)

I don't normally review a multu-chapter story until the end, but I was reading this and thought "what a nice story" and then saw there was more. I look forward to reading the rest.

Gotta say - the show portrayal was fine but that song might actually be the creepiest thing I've ever imagined children singing.

Lllooovvvvvveeeedddd this story so much it was super cute and I loved how all of the parts flowed really nice
Can't wait to read the prequels
Kinda wished this had. Bit more shules in it but other than that fantastic

I'm not the most thorough reader in the world, so no, the scouts part wasn't thorough enough. :3 I honestly thought that this story was somehow illogically bringing in a pair of serial killers-a mentally disabled one and his demented caregiver. It was the repeating song lines part that sealed the deal, ahahaha.

I really love this story. It's run on such an interesting premise, and I'm definitely reading more. :)

Really liked it. I'll read sequels and prequels tomorrow

This is by far my favorite on the FFNet yet!

This was a really great story :)

Omg I loved this story. I think the only thing that would have made it better was if it was a Shassie story. :) It kind of was tho. LOL any who cant wait to read part two.

Great story! So much happened and it flowed really well:) aww Shawn and Lassie are friends:) its about time! I love that you threw Buzz in there along with his wife, they're adorable together! I want some of those cookies;) aww end party was so emotional- the boy scouts and everyone applauding... Awww:) I liked seeing all the different sides of the main characters, their train of thoughts were very interesting and added so much to the story! Im glad Lassie's view of the Spencers keeps changing- Henry isnt the beat at communicating or displaying emotins. Yes! On the Star Wars reference I was actually thinking that- only b/c I just watched it the other day:) I'm definitely going to check out the prequels!

woo hoo they are so cute

i hope things go well

oh man at least he is somewhat back to his normal self

haha this is great

oh man chief is really hurting

but then again there should be pain for a lot of people