A rape/non-con warning would've been nice, but I've come to realize that some people prefer the 'shock factor' or don't want to give away 'spoilers' which is why I'm usually hesitant to read M-rated stories that allude to abuse without being specific. But I gave it a chance and there was no hint at all that he had been raped so I continued, though I truly wish I hadn't. Rape is bad enough in fiction, gratuitous rape is just... disheartening.

That killed me...bloodloss from epic nosebleed. Yep!

Ayeee! I got a nosebleed from that last paragraph! Omg...Itachi AND Gaara naked on the bed...I would have died from blood loss lol.

That was smexy! I would have never known you had no experience. Well done :)

I love it

More Naru... Uke surrounded by semes... I just realized something. sasUKE. Heh, torture is near in my stories...

Love it! I really like how you made Naruto live in Suna. I've never actually found a story that has GaaraxNarutoxItachi. At first it seemed like an odd pairing of sorts but when I read it I was amazed! Keep up the wonderful work!

Brilliant story, good work:)

This was a great fic

Hiyaaaaaa! My poor poor innocent ear- wait. What?! Okay, stop being drama queen. *blink*
But, honestly, I can't find any plot *pouts*
GAH! I AM CONFUSED! WHAT THE _BEEP_ I WANTED TO WRITE ANYWAY?! *crying anime tears*
But *sniff sniff* this i-*hic*-s g-good *hic*
Hey, WAS fisting even possible? I got that one on spidey/venom fic...

-nosebleed-

Awwwww I wanted to read about sasuke getting maimed and Sakura that ugly %# killed but I still love it

What! There should be at least one more chapter! !

Damn that was so incredibly hot! After reading that I cried at the beauty of this scene! It wasnt too smutty or gushy it was just right!

I felt the story was a bit rushed, and you could have spent more time developing your characters for the emotionality and the ending, but i also understand lack of time and inspiration. Sometimes it is better to just finish something and move on. This isn't the best story, but at least you stuck with it and finished it. If you get the time or the inspiration, I would recommend coming back to this story, editing it and expanding it. Flesh this plot out, because you have a decent foundation.