Hi, its been awhile since you published this. Please continue

This is good please continue.

dont sell ur self short ur good

update soon, i look forward to it.

I'm really really enjoying this story and I do hope you update soon. As quick as the first chapter was, you built upon your set up emotions and I love the way you write. Please continue soon...

Interesting.

omg you have to continue i love it...beautiful "crying"

omg you have to continue i love it...the story is done really good. just some few spelling mistakes but that dosen't matter..because you can still understand what your writing..i really like your story. you should contine darkpoet89.

peace

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love that someone picked up on Romez's story as for the 2nd chapter love it looking forward to your next update

this story is progressing nicely :)please continue when u can :D

Great read so far. I do have to ask, what time period does this exactly take place in? First chapter made it seem like this was taking place during Part One while this chapter is more like Part Two. Honestly, I think a fic taking place during Part One would be better, but that's just my opinion.

I think you're doing an excellent job! All this one had a few spelling errors and a run-on, the plot was very good. I don't think I had an idea for how this story would go. I'm glad you decided to turn it into a story.

Yes, don't let shy Hinata go anywhere. Well, at least not for 7 chapters. After all, you still need to bridge the gap between Naruto and Hinata's hearts :O

I like the waking up scene though. It was fluffy if accidental :)

Well, this hasn't provoked anything concerning a M rating so far, but I assume this is because you want the freedom to write what you want. I like this so far, and would like to see more in the future. :-)

Wow... Damn, Hiashi actually disowned her? Whatta jerkoff...

Keep up the good work!

Yo Yo

That was gangster!

You need to hurry up with the next chapter