It's good so far. Mad at Genma though but love how Pakkun is in this. I hate Danzou to no end and he took advantage of one of Tsunade's weaknesses: not strong in genjutsu. Damn. Good though so continue

I really like fics with Danzou in power, Konoha at stake, etc. this would have been great if completed!

Please please please continue the story and update soon!

It was really a delight to read!
I'm pretty shocked that this story has such a small number of reviews!
It deserves so much more recognition !

Gah! This is like a bad nightmare and I can't wake up. Good for you to be able to evoke those kind of feelings from one of your readers!

I know you don't have the time you used to, but could you please finish this story? It is so well written and the plot is very interesting. Please find it in your heart to continue. Thank you!

This is seriously fantastic. I hope you'll update this again in the future.

I'm intrigued. If you are still actively writing, please do continue this story as I'm sure others like myself would much appreciate your calibre of work.

Hey Slink, I know this was written for a contest which has been over for a while now, but is there any chance that you still intend to finish it? Not that I of all people have a right to complain... I'd just really like to know what happens! _v

O_O wow.

I can't even describe...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this! I am...wow. I was on a roller coaster of emotions reading this. I even CRIED when Kakashi left. I don't cry when i read! that's insane...

Wow, I read this fic way back when it was first posted. It was never updated and I almost forgot about it, but just now I reread it again.

Damn. This is an awesome piece of work, are you ever going to finish it?

I know it was done for the Shakespeare competition on LJ that has been waaaaay over but I think this story deserves a continuation :(

really love the story looking forward to more so update soon

Please finish this.

I hope Kakashi kicks genma's teeth in when he returns to the hidden base! :D Cuz seriously, that guy's a jerk. Besides, Kakashi isn't going to believe him just cuz he brought that back with him. I mean come on, its going to smell like him, sakura and genma, but NOT sex. There in lies the proof :) he may know quiet a few details, but what about things that he didn't see? *smirk* it would be awesome if Sakura had a very specific body mark, scar, mole, w/e in a very, intimate place, that only kakashi knew. Hell, even a tattoo would be amazing lol Something that very clearly states that she is his while being her self as well :) Genma can go kiss a cactus.

Okay, thats over! XD to the other characters! OMG! Poor Lady Tsunade! Bastard has her under some type of jutsu! I hope Shizune can get in there and help her out with some very cleaver medicine! :) Then, have them all kick that bastards ass!

Can't wait till you update! :D

i love this story can u please continue, i know u probably dont have the incentive to right because of the lack of reviews but its so hard to fine this story amounst the written garbage out there , great job though