So sweet. :)

Great job ;-)

omg i am seriusly tearing up!

that was just beautiful

Aww, that was so cute!

This story was so sweet! I could not stop smiling!

You have officially made my day!

Thats so cute/a little sad/romantic/ everything else good.

Awww, this is so cute... It would be nice to live your life that way :)

It's so beautiful. I'm in tears of joy at the very end where Chad only hears those four beautiful words from Sonny. Kudos my friend!

Literally bawling my eyes out.

This was totally not what I was expecting. Much better. Sigh. I need to calm down now.

this has to be one of my favorite channys ever!

At first, I thought that this story would get redundant, and fast. But I have to say, I was dead wrong. I like the progression, and how I could tell that they were maturing just through their dialogue in each section. It really was an amazing story, a great idea and gorgeously written. I loved reading it, and thank you for sharing.

loved it so sweet!

Amazing. I was about to cry. Haha.

Well done. :)

This was amazing! And oh so sweet :D Haha I love Chads witty responses :D Aw but when's she's dying her admits it! I loved how their loves progressed through this story and the two of them stayed the same :D Brilliant!

Aww... *tears up* That was so sweet, Scarlett. :')

I actually noticed you had 25 stories instead of 24, so I just had to check this one out. :)

And boy am I glad I did! :P lol. It's just want I needed to fit my mood, :') ...Sappyness...? Haha!

Well, these kinds of one-shots do have that affect on me. And I love it when a story can make me cry, better yet - a one-shot. Because that means you built up so much emotion, in so little words.

Also, no one gave a long review! Shame on you short reviewers! P: lol. So I figured I was perfect gal to give you one. :D Hehe.

Okay, usually in my "Long" reviews - I tell the author my fave parts... but in this review, I'll just tell you the part that made me cry.

"Looks like somebody cares," she shouts at me. The words are familiar, but she's using them as weapons now. It's our first fight, and it better be our last. All because she thinks I forgot our five-year anniversary of being together. As if.

"Somebody was..." I try to defend myself, but her eyes flash and the smile I love isn't there. So I do what any self-respecting boyfriend would. I pull out the Tiffany engagement ring that I've had ready for weeks and hold it out to her. And once she opens up the little blue box and reads the note inside, I know that everything is alright again.

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I bet you thought I was going to put the last part, when they're dying. THAT part... would be... *sheds a tear* -too sad to read over again. Because Chad finally admitted that he CARES. Not only does he care, but for Sonny.

AND, as many other people probably saw it coming - after their first kid, I knew you were going to end it with them dying together. :') Aw. They're happy tears, because it was a happy death. ;'] lol.

Amazing job, Scarlett. I really appreciate you writing this. :)

~eLLIEbEAR

P.S. Yes, you guessed it! I'm so printing this out! XD Haha. So I can keep it close to me, all the days of my life. :D