Manda is now my favorite character.

And thats what you get when you mess with protective older brothers.

I wanted to post this to chapter 4, but FF wouldn't let me. I forgot that I had already posted a review to that chapter. Also, it's funny that Orochimaru died by sneeze in chapter 7. :)

Review to Chapter 4:
Hmm, why were they writing wills? And let's see... "Kabuto, you know I don't like it when you're dominant." ... "I'm sorry Sasuke!" ... Hmm... Okay, see if I got this right... Kabuto is in a relationship with Orochimaru, but he really loves Sasuke. Orochimaru and Sasuke give the appearance of being in a relationship because of their wills, which leave everything to each other and nothing to Kabuto. So Kabuto decides to kill Orochimaru for cheating on him with the person Kabuto really loves... but ends up killing Sasuke along with Orochimaru, and then can't live with himself. So then they're all dead.
Oh boy, this really is a parody of fanfic relationships... even if I got all this completely wrong... it's a pretty accurate parody, too... :)

I always thought this would happen someday... it's a wonder it didn't. Who would have thought that the Great Manda could be so obtuse?

This happened because Deidara blew up the base. With Orochimaru in it. :)

I enjoyed it quite a bit, actually... I like Orochimaru, but I like watching authors kill him as well... :) Maybe Gaara could squish him with his sand during the invasion?

"Sasuke looked crestfallen (meaning: his hair deflated)."
I can totally picture this... HAHAHA! Yes, that's exactly what it means! XD

I was wondering where you were going with this, and even after the punch line it took me a second (I'm tired, give me a break, hahaha). This was fantastic. That's what Orochimaru gets for keeping kusanagi in his throat, haha.

This was a very enjoyable fic to read.

Keep up the great work

Chibi

Lol. I don't particularly hate Orochimaru, he'd seem like an o-kay type person if he wasn't an idiot-why-the-hell-were-you-experimenting-on-people freak. XD

It was weird. Good weird though

The-one-who-is-plotting

K-H

Okay, the first 2 chapters made me smile so far!

nice job.

I don't mind, lol. Thanks for mentioning me though, I appreciate it. orochimaru sucks, so I don't mind him in a little bit of agony, lol :)

So Orochimaru is half a cat with four lives and KabuxSasu...

Oh. I get it! Thats pretty neat idea

yay! kabuto died to! :D