I know this is a old story and you probably haven't gotten reviews in years ... But I like to just tell you, I fucking hate twilight ... But I somehow still enjoyed this story and it's plot ... I actually found it on accident I meant to find another old fan fiction for the mortal instruments and ended up finding this story, and I'm glad that I did ... Will for sure save this story. Also keep in mind my brothers name is Edward so imagine how awkward and hot it was to read the sex seen .

Brilliant

I'm sorry, but Bella is a total bitch and is killing the story for me. I'm carrying on only because of your wonderful and enchanting writing style.

I'm not just crying I'm a mess reading this chapter. You wrote it so well. Thank you

I'm at the end now :(

God I'm crying here first the letter then this

Hope Edward will be ok with the little blood that might come with being the first

Aww what's he playing at?

Hello cold day in hell :) damn in a way that was sexy lol

Poor Bella. They can all smell her. Don't think I would stay at the cullen's lol

Yes let it happen :) I like how she got bags...no paper cuts

I wanna see what Edward has ;) I love Xmas not long now

And so he should be. Making out with Tanya I'm shore he would feel the same as Bella is she was making out wit h some guy

Oh Edward you don't kiss the fuck buddy in front of the girl you are trying to get...oh wait it might help if Bella marks her man

Edward just tight the pic would help not send her into one. :( now they are moving