Oh My God!

this was a fun cute story lifted some of my spirits

I was dieing when I was reading this, thank you so much for writing!

But Bones and Scotty... I ship Scones, btw.
This is awesome. I love Hikaru and Pavel's kiss. That is the best part of this whole thing. My second favorite part is probably the whole, "Ze bite?". You are awesome!

Oh my gosh this is one of the greatest Star Trek fanfiction I've read in a while xD

Aww that was so cute good old McCoy and Scotty. A fantastic piece of writing :)

Aw, it's so adorable. I love the Sulu and Chevok.

agreed. totally nutZ.. teehee

LOVED IT. Haha it was hilarious and Sulu/Chekov was sooooo cute. Spock and Kirk were the best ever, though.

Oh the insanity that is those two teaming up to 'team up' their crew-members. Nice job.

Insanity Signing OFF!

...

*dies*

*twitch*

*cat revives me*

c-c...

EP!

*swoon*

This is so adorable, I just don't have the words! I can see it all, perfectly! With them all being half-drunk, it would so happen. And Scotty and Bones playing cupid? Yeah, I can TOTALLY see that! In TOS, Bones so OBVIOUSLY knows! and I would guess that Scotty does too, and we'd know if we could have more quality time with him. GUH! I am a big puddle of GUSH right now!

Two little TINY grammar things I wanted to point out, not really that important. In the first sentence, you said five me not six. I knew what you meant, I just didn't want any of the sexiness to be left out, you know? In the second paragraph you say Bones and Spock on the left and Sulu and Chekov on the left. Again, not a big deal, just struck me somehow.

Also, I have read a ton of your stories, as you know, and your grammar/spelling is MUCH better than most peoples. There is only one thing that you consistently have a problem with. You mix up tired and tried. So, look out for that. Don't worry, I do it too. ALL THE TIME. Even when I SWEAR I have it typed right, it comes out wrong.

UH, this is so YUMMY! You have a reduced me-PERMANENTLY-to a big pile of SQUEE!

-Meg