Reviews for Swan
DuangKitty chapter 32 . 2/26
oh my god plz update this is so good man
DuangKitty chapter 28 . 2/26
awww
DuangKitty chapter 4 . 2/26
awwwww
silver.wolf.1155 chapter 32 . 5/17/2019
well fuck when will there be more
Yakitori-Chan chapter 32 . 12/30/2018
I read this obsessively on my phone until I finished it. I know this story hasn't been updated in over 2 years, but I really hope you get around to finishing this story eventually! I really enjoy your writing style and how you developed the characters. It's been fun seeing Sae develop and her relationship with Madara develop too. Part of me really hopes for a happy ending for the two of them... but that's just the sap in me.
Reian chapter 32 . 11/21/2018
Mhmm...
Sae...
Madara will need to lose his mask of callousness, no~?
Because if he doesn't... Poor Sae will have to pay
chiyan92 chapter 32 . 9/13/2018
Hi there ! You probably won't see this review seeing your last update was 2 years ago... But I'm really hoping you'll continue with this story, it's getting to juicy ! So pleaseeeee updateeeee ! Thanks and loving your storyyy
ivegotpurple chapter 32 . 7/4/2018
Damn, that was cruel! I just found this series a couple days ago and binge read it. It’s so interesting. I love the way you characterize and write everyone, especially Madara. Sae is such a great character, too. I like that you’re sticking with Madara being Tobi, i think it makes things more interesting. I’m really excited to see how you eventually deal with the war and the eye of the moon plan. This series is great, I really love it, and I hope you come back to it soon!
m chapter 32 . 8/6/2017
omg! on a whim i decided to reread this series because it was always a favorite of mine and the fact that you updated made my fucking week! your writing has definitely improved (expected i suppose after six! years!) and i'm honestly so stoked to see this finished!

i noticed you haven't updated for 8 months tho! you said the ending was already written so i really hope that means you will! :) though hopefully not in 2023 this time, hahaha! thank you!
Chisorita chapter 32 . 8/6/2017
Bruh! I will literally die if you don't continue this. Even if it's just one more chapter. I beg of you !
nommy2 chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
I really hope that you are going to continue this! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. It is so sad that it hasn't been updated in so long
nommy2 chapter 32 . 2/27/2017
I absolutely LOVE Saezuri.
Hope that you will update soon!
Thatgirlinthepajamas chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
YOUR STORY/DEPICTION OF MADARA/WRITING STYLE GIVES ME LIFE! TT
Guest chapter 32 . 12/15/2016
Madara you fucking dick XD
JojoKittyLove chapter 32 . 12/15/2016
Thank you for the update!
I always come to appreachoate ypur style of writing, as it is one of the best i have read on this site.

Every chapter my opinion about Madara swings, it's really frustrating how he's not open about his feelings - not even to himself. But well, i'm just gonna continue reading. Hope you update soon!

x Kitty
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