| Reviews for Annabeth Is A Jezebel |
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  Orangepuff chapter 4 . 3/15/2011 It was just so f****** amazing - Marie |
| Orangepuff chapter 4 . 3/15/2011 I love it you should have part of it in Agilia POV but please please please describe the percabeth kiss... - Marie |
 ConcreteAngelRoxHerHalo chapter 4 . 1/12/2011 I absolutely luvluvluved it! it would make me happy happy joy joy if u updated!1 |
| Kataang1 chapter 1 . 10/26/2010 ooh! I loke it! :) Check out my PJ story? |
| Ich spreche kein Deutsch chapter 4 . 5/2/2010 haha man this story is moving so fast...im so glad theyre back together! :) update soon! :D:D:D |
| FamousAuthorToBE chapter 4 . 4/30/2010 LOL! Love athena's point of veiw. I have an AWESOME idea? I know it got blown up in the 5th book, but how about them accidentally going on a cruise on the princess andromeda! WHAT DO YOU THINK!/ pm mE! -BFF KT! |
| Pauly4life chapter 4 . 4/7/2010 Love it! Lurve it! Haha. UPDATE FASTER! |
| apollosgirl77 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010 OMG I ABSULUTALY TOTALY MANIACLY LOVE IT PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
| 8vLc chapter 4 . 4/2/2010 nice chapter |
| Pauly4life chapter 3 . 3/28/2010 Love the story! |
| FamousAuthorToBe chapter 3 . 3/27/2010 as much as i hate to say it prepare yourself to open critisism now that i actually KNOW what this story is about. One of the things that struck me odd, is that everyone seems a little too cheery to be getting a divorce. Maybe you could flashback to the time Nico proposed to give the reader an idea of their romance? So far you haven't given us many details about it. Maybe if you take out some of the random singing that would be great. Or maybe you can have the song playing in the elevator of the empire state building? You haven't told us where the music is coming from. Maybe make Aphrodite more empty headed? I have a good idea for a continuation. What if Posideon (sorry if i spelled that wrong) and Athena don't like Percy and Annabeth together? Maybe a little trouble on their honeymoon? What about a cruise for the honeymoon? (you see where im headed right) out on the ocean posideon can attack them. Even if it means killing his son in the process. Maybe Niko should still love Annabeth after all that? Maybe they could be caught kissing on the deck with both of their spouses watching? Ok so now that I've given you MANY suggestions. I can't wait to see what you come up with! BTW This is all friendly suggestion so you can choose if u want to take my advice or not. CHEERIO POPPIT! |
| FrancieskaMarion chapter 3 . 3/20/2010 umm. so that was it? you didn't really explain anything... it just kinda flew by. it was ok. you could do better after the last 2 chapters though |
| THISISNOTACTIVEANYMORE chapter 3 . 3/19/2010 Your not the only one Annabeth, Nico's romantic speak made me almost laugh a lung out. I don't have any ideas, sorry, but hope you get some! :{D |
| 8vLc chapter 3 . 3/18/2010 End? REALLY? Are you nuts? This fic is awesome! |
| Scarhead62 chapter 3 . 3/17/2010 you should write another chapter about the cruise you should make them cruise around on a giant pair of underwear that would be hilarious |
