Reviews for Unfinished Business
KookiePie1025 chapter 15 . 11/10/2018
Please please update. This is so good! You write beautifully!
Amaniias chapter 15 . 5/16/2018
I was so caught up in the story I was really sad to see that u just stopped. like stopped! how can that be? U really have a talent in ur writing skills.:D or is it simply life that was caught up with u? I hope that some day. Some day u will continue this fantastic story. I wanna see what Aizen has in mind with Inoue now that she has "done" her job. where the drone that has lost her fingers? uhh I have so many questions to be answered... :P anyway take whatever time u need. (If u still writing.) or something like that.
Missyann13 chapter 9 . 7/26/2016
I'm currently on chapter 9 and I'm lovOne the story! It is written very well. Excited to read what happens next.
gollumsfriend chapter 15 . 5/5/2016
Was enjoying the story, really a shame it was abandoned!
Tenma chapter 15 . 8/5/2015
Reread this fic again. Still hoping you'd finish this.. Please? :)
shiloah18 chapter 15 . 12/28/2014
I was brought here by Walis' advertising from her fic, "Coronado" in chap 25... and I'm glad I gave this fic a shot.

Though it's quite saddening that this baby hasn't been updated since three years ago. Give it three or four more days and it'll be four years. xp

Reading the part where Grimmjow says he can't love Hime... reminded me of a fan art by bu-nong from deviantart entitled, "Switched Sides 35". It's more UlquiHime but let me type the lines as to why I thought of it. In said fan art, Hime is an Espada with Ulquiorra as her Fracción. The following lines by Hime is what I remembered while reading the last part of this chap:

"But we cannot understand such feeling with such word. We do not have hearts. It can't be helped. That's why I torment him this much. We can only assured it this way. This is the affection between me and Ulquiorra."

Aside from UlquiHime, she also has GrimmHime fan arts too. You guys might wanna check them out in case they could get your muse back. :D

I'm glad that this chap isn't a cliffhanger but... the question "what happens next?" has yet to be answered. Altogether, brilliant fic! I just enjoy these dark fics. I hope to read an update on this but I won't demand that you do. A masterpiece could never be rushed so, take your time.

Thank you for this!
Guest chapter 15 . 12/25/2014
Go on grimmy ýou can do it
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 15 . 11/30/2014
Oh dear God, his words were so beautiful... I loved this last part of the chapter. I know it's been a long while since you last updated. I was reading "Coronado" from Walis and she mentioned your fic in a chapter and spoke highly of it so I couldn't resist peaking.

It was worth it.

I hope I could hear from you one day(? Maybe see an update. It would so be worth the wait!

JeanyDeiXzz
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 14 . 11/30/2014
Is it like a clone of Grimmjow or something? Will it be her Fracción?
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 13 . 11/30/2014
Awww :( Grimmjow is finally starting to admit (albeit internally) that he cares for her in atleast more than one way :3!
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 12 . 11/30/2014
I knew it! I knew he had more intentions towards her e.e
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 11 . 11/30/2014
I can't help but feel that Aizen will damage Orihime in more than one way..
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 10 . 11/29/2014
I didnt underdtand that part :/
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 9 . 11/29/2014
Is it something bad? :(
JeanyDeiXzz chapter 8 . 11/29/2014
I just want to know... why is he acting less like a hollow and more like a human?
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